Just as the title says. There's all sorts of adventures children can get into when they're in the tub! I thought of this while I was taking a bath...
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Very Cute![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Awk out of context.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
BUBBLES!!!![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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That was cute. I like that you at least acknowledged that somepony like Princess Celestia would "raise" children with the help of servants. She has a country to run, after all.
Ok i loved it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
LOL so cuite![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Awwww, that was adorable!
I like little one-shots like that. That helped make my evening, thank you and great work!
I expect it might hit the Feature Box.
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
The Cuteness, It wounds me
D'awwwww
Cryssy, this is the kind of stuff you write that always warms a dead man's heart. These little one-shot, slice-of-life stories about Twilight as a filly. Thank you once again! You're still one of my favorite authors on here.
Dawww this was great![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1217631 I hope it hits EQD once I sent id. But that would be awesome. Let me know if it does--off to work! :B
1217631 Furthermore, does anyone have any idea how the feature box works? Do writers suggest a fic to the admins? Because there's a few fics I want to see hit the feature box
1218300![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Depends on how fast it gets likes and faves.
For example. 100 faves and 100 likes within a minute get you to feature box.
Look at Wanderer D.
Fully automated.
1218313 OHHH....I see. So it's automated! Darn, I wanted to suggest a few fics I've read. Hm, I'm still submitting it to EQD once my editor runs through c:
I think my favorite thing about this was the perfect way it encapsulated a child's ability to turn anything into a game and make it epic.
I can't offer any suggestions or a critique for this. Good flow, grammar, style, characterizations, idea, and execution. There was enough humor and DAAWWWborable to keep it "flavorful."
I think you may have hit upon something here if you were looking to continue the story. "The Misadventures of Twilight & Spike" perhaps?![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Anyway, favorited and thumb'd up. Good work!
1218379 I was thinking of continuing this little series...and I was considering naming it that. How on earth did you--get out of my heaaaad!!!!!![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
But thank you, that is what I was going for. A Child's imagination is just endless, even little Twilight. before she prefers to keep things "practical". *giggle*
1218387![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Better idea. Write next story as new chapter and see if you see if it fits. If it does, mark this story as Incomplete and add chapters.
Win-win!
1218402 Ha, it does! c: And I can just change the name of the fic! That's a good idea
1218409![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Why over-complicate things? Make it simple!
Simple solutions!
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I'm psychic, what can I say.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Honestly, whether this matters or not, but this story does prove you have enough "grasp and creative license" to pull it off and make it brilliant. Keeping such a broader story in mind, it felt like I was reading a chapter from such a story. Again, good work!![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
D'awwwwwwww![:derpyderp1:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpyderp1.png)
Loved it!
must...resist...urge.....to..........D"AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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Awwww. This is so cute!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
People should write about filly Twily and spike playing more often.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
awwwwwww
sUPEr cute
D'aaww levels: fatal.
Very cute and quite entertaining.
Write on!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Great job!
I liked the etory but with kids myself the only thing i could think was how irresponsible celestia was leaving a toddler in a full bathtub with out an adult. Kids can drown in that
okay...that was adorable.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
Read this awhile ago and decided to seek out all the adorable Filly Twi/Baby Spike stories that were utterly adorable. They really should be in my favorites.
2088937 Everything in life is wonderful when you have filly Twi and baby Spike![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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troppo carino too cute
awwww, that was just TOO cute.
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That was pretty cute.
Is there a club for Baby Spike?
A bit like Eloise Takes A Bawth, (my least favorite Eloise book), but better
That was adorable!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
And from that day forth, much to Future Twilight's dismay
, Princess Celestia had the adventures of Captain Sparkle Pants and her trusty First Mate Patchy the Dragon immortalized in the halls of Canterlot