Ava have always been a doormat and a really quiet person. But one day, one of her favorite characters from her favorite show: My Little Pony, came into her world. She tells fluttershy how she needs help standing up for herself. Fluttershy knows just what to do to stand up for herself.
Thank you:Pinkiepartypie29 helping me edit this story!
While the story needs to be edited better(no offense to the editor themselves as my content is/was way worse before being edited), the story does have charm and for me, that's all I need in a story![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
10289926![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
Thanks
10289928 Of course. Also, just to make it look better, I suggest when crediting the editor, just their name is fine as it looks cleaner. Like this-
Pinkiepartypie29
Of course, you don't have to do it but just food for thought. Sorry if I'm imposing![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
10289932![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
Thanks for that. I’ll use it next time
10289966![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
Thank you so much
I agree this story does have quaint charm, besides we all start somewhere.
I had fun, above all that's really all a story should be.
Good job!
10290001![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
Thank you
I really liked this! Sometimes the stories between humans and ponies don’t flow super well, but you did a really nice job on this one! One teeny, tiny tip would be to not be afraid to be more descriptive, but, like I said, I liked this story a lot.
that’s so Fluttershy to help out like that.![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
10294442![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Thank you