Applebloom wakes up to the feeling of heat and the suffocation of smoke. Not knowing the cause of the heat or the unnatural color of the flames, Applebloom tries to escape but ends up finding a darker story unfolding in the inferno.
Part of 1000ish horror writing practice.
Sequel?
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I don't know yet. Do you like it?
I think it’s interesting
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Yes I do.
The word offed seems kinda of weird to me.
How about
Other than pacing, I loved it.
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Ok. I'll learn and practice better pacing for the next horror.