• Published 19th Jan 2020
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Brutality - Zedfire



4 extremely powerful beings, whether created from genetic tampering, a bio weapon, cybernetics, or being gifted power from a godly being, must work together to ensure peace in Equestria, though they don't all share the same views.

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FUCK YEAH LETS GO

MOOOORRREEE!!!

Strange to see Grievous fighting on good side instead of the dark side, but a welcome change! If these four team up, they should really go down in Equestrian history as the Fantastic Four... sorry, couldn't leave this out.

This chapter was a surprise to be sure but a welcome one.

Tempest is doomed no matter what when fighting against Grievous
Not only he wasn't using his other lightsabers, wasn't completely dedicated to killing her, but he was also trained to kill Jedi.
He also didn't use his fear he normally uses in fights
Also, he is very gymnastic
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Also it doesn't matter that's it's from Clone Wars 2003 , he rally is like that but it's harder to animate his fighting skill in 3D

Again he killed Jedi.
Force users who constantly use force for their advantage
Like being aware of their surroundings, it's how they don't kill themselves accidentally by lightsabers, because they always know where the blade is

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Well, I wanted a fusion between the versions, the sheer combat prowess and deadly nature of the 2003 cartoon version and the 2008 3d model and its mocking banter, minus the nerfs they had given him then.

Well??!! Do you want to Update this, and your other Stories please?

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Look buddy, I don't have a consistent update schedule. I know that probably upsets you, but I don't want constraints to force me to do something that I like doing so much to the point where I don't want to do it anymore. Let me ask you something, what's the point in doing something if you don't like doing it?

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Sorry. I Don't want to upset you and make you not like making your stories. It's just you haven't updated your amazing stories from last year or even back in 2019 to 2017. 😕


Besides, it's not like I did something worse? Like nag you all week or anything. I just politely ask you to update every two months.

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I know. Still, you don't have to comment on my stories to remind me that I haven't updated in a while. Just simply try to word it in a way that doesn't seem so demanding is all I request from you.

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Just asking on what's happening to your stories? Are you on Hiatus or Writer's Block?

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Honestly, a little bit of both. I just want inspiration to build up to the point where I can write more consistently than I am now.

I really want to see how this turns out

Good, very good. $ very powerful beings from different universes forced to work together against something greater them each of themselves alone. Very stimulating.

The Slayer was highly impressed. He had no qualms with being brutal, he himself took pleasure in it to a degree. Normally he wouldn't condone doing something like that to a mortal being, but considering Verko was in the slavery trade, it was likely the Slayer would do worse if he had the chance.

Called it
I knew he would thought of that

Can't wait for more chapters

Plz update I beg you

Grievous is shown more respect here than in some of the modern media, which I applaud. I really wish this story was continued, as it has great potential.

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