Have you ever asked yourself, "What would it be like if your life was in some ways like a video game?" I didn't, and it's a lot more complicated than to press a button to win
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This might or might not be a stupid question but is Gentle Touch pregnant?
Are you gone skip head to the point were he is old enough to go to school
though i would love to see a story go long. at the current pace its gonna be 300 or so chapters before he's a year old. i do hope these things either get slightly shorter. or cover several days. not to say the detail isn't great. but this infant stuff isn't going to be interesting for to long even with the GAME here to keep spicing all this stuff up
I LOVE this story and I hope you continue!
I love the story so far but it seams that you have some problems with grammar here and there.
... okay. I feel as if that did not need to be said, and it makes me wonder which corners of Fimfiction you frequent... ;]
In any case, you have my interest - enough that I'm willing to "look the other way" whenever I spot a mistake (I'm something of a grammar nazi on occasion - just to properly qualify the previous statement). Other than that... I'm all for a slow burn, but please keep churning those chapters out if that's the case. Interest dies fast if there's nothing happening, you know.
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The next chapter is done and the next one after that is about 40% done, but both still need editing.
wrong version of being non-dead,
otherwise enjoyed the reread, probably need to fill in some gaps in memory if i want to keep up with everything anyway
deflating balloon wheeze
His hypocritical bitching around is starting to get on my nerves.
Most people on that site simply cannot force themselves to write good story without adding some nasty bits.
Is that so hard?
It's things like this that repulse many people. Things that are not needed nor wanted.
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Light without dark is pointless. Contrast between highs and lows help to raise one or the other. Without one, the other is lessened. It's a balancing act that many struggle with but it has its place in writing.
Mother my waste capacity has reached its limit. I must now use the restroom
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Yeah, the Game is very close to the most formal words the English language has to over in a very cold way. The text of hin will get a tad more "warm" as the story goes on
And what about his intentions?
Two days without taking a shit is impressive.