Twilight has always loved mysteries. Almost nothing could compare to the joy she feels when finding an answer to a question no pony knew. But now she's solved a mystery with an answer she doesn't want, and it's one she can never forget
A little filly is found in the forest, she has incredible magical powers. Celestia sends her to live with Twilight Sparkle as a student, but eventually she becomes like a daughter to Twilight and she raises the filly, and discovers something new.
Twilight was blasted by the Elements of Harmony, creating a huge light show overhead. Twilight was placed onto the ground outside, in a light that was the shape of her cutie mark. Twilight was asleep.
A bit messy, enough to the extent that I didn’t feel comfortable giving this a Thumps Up. You might want to seek out a few proofreaders/editors until you think you’re back in the swing of things.
9895473 ....... GAH! I just realized I forgot Spike! (Headesk) Well I'd say at this point (considering Equestria's sun has become a red giant) he's probably passed on as well.
A good short story. Not perfect but very heartwarming and satisfying. Although personally I really hope that Twilight doesn’t have to go through all that pain and loneliness.
A bit messy, enough to the extent that I didn’t feel comfortable giving this a Thumps Up. You might want to seek out a few proofreaders/editors until you think you’re back in the swing of things.
But overall, not bad!
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Thank you. I'll just be glad someone liked it.
Thanks for sending me this. Not bad. I just updated mine
Though Spike is missing here? There a reason for that?
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....... GAH! I just realized I forgot Spike! (Headesk) Well I'd say at this point (considering Equestria's sun has become a red giant) he's probably passed on as well.
A good short story. Not perfect but very heartwarming and satisfying. Although personally I really hope that Twilight doesn’t have to go through all that pain and loneliness.
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I kinda wanted to show that even if Twilight does live for a long time even she had a light at the end of the tunnel.