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typervader


I will try to be a fun person, but will always act professionaly with my work. You will find me all over the internet, and I try to look at all the sides and act resonable on the internet.

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Slight criticism here. Need paragraphs and separate who is talking as to not confuse people.

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It looks like that on my screen.

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I meant like separate the words that Lee, Twilight and the others said.

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I'm just gonna drop the conversation now. I don't want to get confused anymore.

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he means when some one changes speaking, type it as a new paragraph and also put one of the indents when every you are starting a new paragraph (you can use it using your keyboards tab key)

I.E.
Lee wasn't really buying it but went with it either way, but since they weren't attacking him he thought they were safe...for now anyway.

"So..you don't know either huh...well...suppose we should help each other for now. Even if I don't completely trust what you are yet, a lot of weird things have been happening today." He shrugs a bit turning to look at the house.

"Well...thanks for trusting us. Name's Princess Twilight Sparkle. This here is Spike, my number one assistant, and Starlight Glimmer, my student." She was hoping to make things a bit less tense between the four of them as Lee turns to look at them.

"Name's Lee. I don't trust you I just don't see the point in hurting such cute innocent creatures for now when we have way more problems." Which was true. The four of them had much bigger problems to worry about. They were in the backyard of some strangers house with creatures they had no idea what they were all around them. They had no food and water, and both Twilight and Lee were still injured from earlier. They decided to head onto the house.

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yeah i suggest getting an editor, a second opinion could definitely help

Comment posted by AntSPONGEBOB deleted Sep 17th, 2019

Okay I like this so I would hope it gets updated or continued plz

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please update for me

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Can you make What if Twilight and her friends were in The Walking Dead Telltale Universe fanfiction just Make sure Twilight and her friends pony forms stays and TWD Character stays human form. Fanfiction

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Can you make What if Twilight and her friends were in The Walking Dead Telltale Universe fanfiction just Make sure Twilight and her friends pony forms stays and TWD Character stays human form. Fanfiction

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Can you make What if Twilight and her friends were in The Walking Dead Telltale Universe fanfiction just Make sure Twilight and her friends pony forms stays and TWD Character stays human form. Fanfiction

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Can you make What if Twilight and her friends were in The Walking Dead Telltale Universe fanfiction just Make sure Twilight and her friends pony forms stays and TWD Character stays human form. Fanfiction

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Can you make What if Twilight and her friends were in The Walking Dead Telltale Universe fanfiction just Make sure Twilight and her friends pony forms stays and TWD Character stays human form. Fanfiction

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Can you make What if Twilight and her friends were in The Walking Dead Telltale Universe fanfiction just Make sure Twilight and her friends pony forms stays and TWD Character stays human form. Fanfiction

Next Chapter! Please!

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