Where am I? Equestria. Why am I there? To bring the CMC + 1 to fight and document the various monsters lurking inside Everfree Forest, dunno why, just am. How? Fight them. Any means I want. Guess that explains why I'm Screwball. Doesn't answer why I'm anthro and naked though. Oh well.
So...just to be clear, you want us to dislike your story if we enjoyed it?
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Correct.
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Well, I enjoyed what is there.
Now when you say "Anthro", do you mean just a Pony Head & Tail on a Human Body, or Tikbalang style where you have the Torso & Arms with Hands of a Human, but the Head, Tail & Legs with Hooves of a Pony?
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Mix of both. Looks like a satyr, minus the horns, plus a pony tail.
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Well if your "Anthro" looks something similar to THIS, cdn.cgsociety.org/cg/g03/518303/518303_1370805713_orig.jpg then it would be a Philippines Mythological Tikbalang, it's basically the Horse equivalent of a Minotaur.
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Dear god, no! Human upper half, head included, man! Search satyr, remove the horns, and make the waist down pony!
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Oh you mean like THIS kind of a Satyr?
i.pinimg.com/736x/53/04/5f/53045f73554d7a348ba4af3e4712675c--minotaur-narnia.jpg
BTW, you could just make it where your Anthro looks more like THIS idea for an MLP Tikbalang -
img00.deviantart.net/e1bc/i/2012/276/7/4/an_idea_by_jopa04-d5gnlgk.png
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Wrong again, on both counts.
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Satyr. Minus horns. Plus pony tail. That is the anthro I'm looking at.
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So Basically what You're going for is Half-Human/Half-Pony on a Fractional Level instead of a Genetic Level, that makes me wonder if it would even be considered "Anthro" at all, sounds more like it could be considered a Hybrid or something.
And based on how you describe it, sounds like what you're going for is a Greek Mythological Ipotane -
images.vector-images.com/clipart/xl/176/ipotane1.jpg
But in Greek Mythology there is also a race of Humans with Horse Hooves instead of Feet known as the Hippopodes -
media1.faz.net/ppmedia/aktuell/2247149908/1.3728657/width610x580/hippopodes-pferdefuessler-ein-asiatisches-volk.jpg
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Second one.
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So the Screwball in you're story is an Ipotane, interesting take on the character.
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Don't know the lore, but...
naaahhhh.