Hello, my name is Elkia. I like writing stories and reading them dearly, and I am a big fan of Nordic culture. Enjoy my fiction!
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When the Cutie Mark Crusaders go to Vinyl and Octavia, they discover something truly unusual: foal playing. Octavia quickly explains to them why and how, and then the CMC's decide to try it for themselves. They pretend to be a family, in order to earn their cutie marks. And one very unfortunate filly is playing the foal...
Cuteness galore in this strange and awkward story!
Thanks to Caroline Cottrell for pre-reading.
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Heh, this story was... wierd. But overall a good read if you like the CMC.
It was supposed to be a bit weird but with a strong message. That was what I was going for. I'm glad you liked it and thank you so, so much for the comment! I might make a sequel on this featuring Vinyl and Octavia which will be even more awkward. Be prepared, hahaha!
Wow... this was wonderful!
The story had that silly-caring vibe and then it got so serious and loving in the end. I have no words to describe how good of a story this was other than as I said above, “wonderful”.
You have earned a like and favorite from me. Right when I finished reading it was the first thing I did.
Though I’m surprised I didn’t see this story sooner, as it says the first comments are back in October of 2018
I would love if you made another story with scoots saying yes to being changed to a foal for only a month or something like that
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Dear JordanOlson,
Thank you so much for your kind words. You have made my day for sure!
It's true that this story is quite different (and a bit controversial) from my usual works, and I doubted for a long time whether I wanted to have it published on FIMFiction at all. The reason why you didn't see it sooner is that I only recently found the inner courage to join a couple of ABDL/pony-ageplay groups on FIMFiction, where I eventually posted this story as well. I am kind of proud but wildly ashamed of this story at the same time, yet I had to write it just to get back in the game and deal with an awkward and secret curiosity of mine, hehe. 
All in good fun, though, and I always keep these kinds of stories innocent and funny.
Once again thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I hope you have a wonderful day!
Elkia
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I actually have some ideas for a short sequel where Scootaloo might or might not change her mind. The idea came to me when I saw the 'Ailicorn' MLP short, where one of Zecora's potions accidentally turns Twilight into a foal. I have a lot of other stories, planned, though, including a saga (more like a trilogy, actually) I've been working on since the beginning of my writing career, so don't expect the sequel next week or so. Nevertheless, I hope I can entertain you with my other stories, if you're interested. There are some funny ones on my profile, like 'The "Ship" in "Shipping"' and 'Zephyr's New Plan,' a story I released this very morning for April Fool's Day. I hope to see you in my next stories! 
Thanks for reading my story, Stargriefer.
Elkia
I don't know if you're aware of this, but the CMC had gotten their marks by the time this story was put up.
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I usually wait at least a month after I've written the story before I start editing the first draft. Then I send the second draft to friends and incorporate their comments and ideas into the second draft to create a third draft. It's the way I write, time-consuming, I know, but it does help giving my readers the best story experience they can possibly get from me. 
And even when I finished editing it took me a long while to find the courage to publish this strange tale on FIMFiction. It's just so awkward and weird and I know there are tales on FIMFiction which are much stranger, but still I felt a little ashamed putting this online. 
Whatever. I did it anyway. No regrets!
Yes, you're right. I actually waited a long time before I put this story on FIMFiction, and by the time I wanted to publish it, the CMC's had gotten their cutie marks.
I hope this answers your question. Have a wonderful day!
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Hey, no worries. As someone who's wrote a story here myself, I know how you feel. You want the story to be as great as you can, and yeah, having to encourage yourself to put it up is a big step, since there's always the chance that people will not like it as much as you thought.
Uh, Countess Coloratura and Rara are the same pony.
Poor Scootaloo! This was adorable, and strange, and awkward indeed! ^^ Your voice came through very clearly in this. :) I do love the dialogue and the way everyone argues and reasons things out.
I do have one suggestion for improvement: the gaps between paragraphs are a bit long, which makes it more difficult to read. One blank line between paragraphs is fine.
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I don't think that's intentional. When I put my story up, I had a similar problem, and I only did a double space between paragraphs. I think it has to do with the way the site's system separates them, because I had to single-handedly backspace each break until it was back to how I wrote it.
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Putting up a story is an even bigger step if you know the story is a bit... controversial, hehe. 
Your opinion as a fellow writer is always worth gold!
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Indeed, I like to write dialogue very much, although it does have the habit of cluttering a story and making it longer than you figured it would be (or sometimes even longer than it should be 
), especially if you add body language and (direct) thoughts in the form of interior monologue. In fact, I like writing dialogue so much that I decided to write a story with only dialogue and onomatopoeia, which I posted on April Fool's Day this year (Zephyr's New Plan). You're right about the insane paragraph spacing. It has to do with importing Gdocs documents into FIMFiction using the button. At that time I felt it was the best way to get the text from MS Word into FIMFiction, but now I just copy-paste it directly and everything goes fine. I've learned a lot over the years, and not just about writing, but also about FIMFiction itself, haha! 
Thanks for your positive comment, Hawthorn!
Stay awesome!
Elkia
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The only thing that doesn't work that way is if you use colors, but not many writers use other colors (I did once, and I had to re-color everything by hoof in FIMFiction 
). Also, I'm not sure about pictures. You probably used the import button to import text from Gdocs into FIMFiction. THAT is when you get the ridiculous paragraph spaces. Hope this helps you!
Try copy-pasting the text directly from Microsoft Word (or whatever program you use) into the area where you write in FIMFiction. It works all the time, even with cursive, bold, and underlined text.
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Well, that's just it, I did just copy/paste, but that still gave me that issue.
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That's strange... Maybe it has to do with your writing program or your font? I switched from Times New Roman to Calibri in Microsoft Word. Or maybe it is a quirk of FIMFiction that has been fixed? Just theorizing here. It could be anything.
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Yeah. Other than that, this is a good story!
Yeah you are right, lol!
Also, I shouldn't even have let Sweetie Belle think about that name, because Rara is of course the nickname Applejack gave to Coloratura so it makes little sense for Sweetie Belle recalling that nickname. Thanks for the compliment! I'm glad to see you enjoyed the story, even though it was a little strange. Have a wonderful day! 
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There is a plan to fix paragraph spacing in under formatting button when you edit chapters
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I'll definitely take note of that when I release my next story.
Ah okay good to know. Thanks!
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Sorry I meant to say that there is a button in the formatting section to fix paragraphs. Also I have no idea how you expected diapers for two-year-olds to fit a 10-year-old I was kind of a stretch
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Alright! Thanks for the tip! :) As for your second point, I recall Pinkie accidentally putting one on herself in the episode 'Baby Cakes,' and she's even bigger than Scootaloo, or am I wrong?
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I mean it’s pinkie pie. I still don’t think it would work but whatever your story Shrug it just sounds like you would be way too tight and not nearly thick enough to do anything like wearing really tight underwear
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Okay, if that's what you think then that's alright. Have a good day! ;)
quite an interesting start
awww
awww, I’m getting even more inspired to work on my story, but I kinda have writer’s block, hell I still haven’t completed the prologue :/
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