The Merchant, who has sent countless people off to different Equestrias was once a normal person, till one fateful day an act of kindness turned his world upside down.
just a batpony/thesteral wanting to do that in which I do.
The Merchant, who has sent countless people off to different Equestrias was once a normal person, till one fateful day an act of kindness turned his world upside down.
You really need an editor friend. Get this thing polished up a bit.
8161580 I know and I forgot to ask him.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
8161767 hey some are good, but you are entitled to your thought.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
8161819 agreed.