It is just a normal school day, and Twilight is just a little early as always; but today something is going to show her that friends come in all shapes and sizes—sometimes even in mud! Taking the tiny, pony-like creature home, she is shocked when it wants to get a whole lot closer to her than any other friend.
Contains: Science, alp-luachra (cute tiny pony-like stomach parasite), adorableness, and probably more science.
Art is from the amazing and wonderful Ghostly Muse, always awesome stuff, thanks Kenzie!
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Chapters (4)
More? You want more? Well, more will be coming! No real schedule on this one (like most of my other "little fics") but with art like that to inspire me I can't resist coming back. Ada is just the most adorable little monster ever!
Of course you did.
Awesome! So cute!
Sooo does this classify as vore?
7722445 I guess, I am trying not to fetishize it, however.
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7722472 Does it count as vore if the thing being swallowed is supposed to be swallowed? Inquiring fetishists want to know!
Interesting... I've read the story that this was based upon so wasn't completely surprised or put off. Fortunately, you have the knack for making almost anything cute.
7723427 This isn't really based off a story. Afaik the "pony themed" alp-luachra are all from Badumsquish's artwork, which of course was based on the old folk-tales about them.
dawwwww..... HNNNNNNGGGG!! has heart attack do to Ada
Soft, cute, non-sexual vore. I wish there was more of this
She seems a little unconcerned with that particular 'yes'.
Heheh, that was cute and interesting. Kudos for going out on the parasitic limb - it's definitely an open topic. I look forward to more of this story... and I thank you for it because you've sparked my weird little mind. You're awesome!
7723577 Because it was two questions, she wasn't sure how to answer.
7723605 I... have done a LOT on various parasites. After all, changelings are a parasite.
7723703 lmao okay, you got me there. Touché indeed. I've yet to read most of your other stuff (curses to self for having a large backlog).
Still, it's not a subject that I've seen a lot of, outside of changelings. I'm still reading your story Given Shape, which I was introduced to when it popped up as a featured on the home page. Your work is catchy and intriguing. Really, I thoroughly enjoy the way you create your story worlds (from what I've seen so far) and it's inspiring in a way. Hell, I'm envious!
I have but three issues so far, but none of them are a turn-off.
1: Twilight's lack of a reaction to Ada saying yes to laying eggs inside her.
2: Ada is just now learning to talk, which means she should only know words she's already heard, and you have her knowing words she hasn't.
3: Not enough use of contractions in dialogue.
Other than those things, liking the story so far.
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1: Yeah, I might need to rewrite that bit to stress Twilight realizing that she had asked two questions and made it impossible to answer both
2: Fixed that, I completely missed that she hadn't heard "nope"
3: Really? Hrmm, I will need to go back and watch more of the 3rd and 4th movie to get her dialogue more squarely in my head.
Thanks for the critique and kind words!
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You did make it clear that she asked two questions at once, then you had her realize she did and had her ask the questions separately and get an answer for both. My main problem with this part is that when she asked "Are you going to lay eggs in me?" as it's own, separate question, and received a yes in response, she didn't react at all.
7724699 I'd be freaking out over the eggs and as a good sampling with 325 favourites in my list so far it seems it's mostly assumed to be just the ponies that don't like contractions, especially Tia & Luna.
At least Sci-Twi shouldn't gain any extra weight, good dieting aid!
Hmm not evil enough to be Goa'uld, eggs supposedly not harmful so not Xenomorph, has been wet in hand basin already so not Mogwai, could be similar to symbiont Dax, in Deep Space 9, Symbiosis would be good, though not necessary to join bodies, but something of mutual benefit to Sci-Twi would be good like increased health and healing, as per the usual shtick.
Not sure what it is yet but obviously something triggered into being by that magic of Princess Twi. Will wait for eventual reveal.
Kyoot
It's sapient, therefore not evil, right?
Hey, at least it's better than a changeling hosting... Wait, that could be beneficial, as traditionally changelings don't really process normal food...
Keep going! ;)
7747112 Ahem, there is such a story, but it is M rated so I shan't be linking it here.
7747191 that's my allusion!
7747192 Nope, not here. This is adorable and consensual, cute and happy symbiotic parasite story. No naughty!
7747195 yep!
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You can't have a symbiotic parasite though; they're mutually exclusive words.
/nitpick
It does seem like it ended completely out of the blue though.
Very... odd. Interesting, too, in its own way.
Wouldn't really call it an ending, though. More like something that just abruptly halts. There is no end point, there's nothing at all except questions.
A pet for everyone!
Though, it's doubtful Twi will be able to fix the "smells bad" problem, it's a fact of what's inside the stomach after all.
Keep going! ;)
Awe... and I was really getting into this one, too.
Still, that was frickin adorable. Thanks for another fun read.
Dang you all, I was trying to say "Yay, another one marked completed!" but you are all right, this needs more. Going to hit it with incomplete again... FML.
I am suddenly reminded of Rufus from Kim Possible.
Also, leave it to Canterlot High to get a meme for a substitute teacher
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Actually they're not mutually exclusive. Parasitism is a subclass of symbiosis.
7770265 A pet that just keeps giving, and taking, and giving, and taking...I'm just going to put e.t.c. here now!
7770385 it is a nice story. But is relationship a symbiotic or completely parasitic? Will Twilight get anything from being the host like stronger immune system or passive magic sense or anything else?
16 weeks have passed.
Hm... What kind if sense of smell does Ava has? Does she even see in same spectrum or close one to it?
Does someone hate you or something? It's like every comment you make has 1 dislike for what seems like no reason.
8339575 I blocked someone who was leaving troll-like comments. They apparently decided this was the best use of their time.
Time to make Ada bubble tea!
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So spiteful
8339948 Heh, I would link it so you could enjoy the train wreck, but the story it is in is M rated, and can't link those from here.
YES! AN UPDATE! FINALLY! WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG?!
Thank you, for I enjoyed this.
8340037 Needed some motivation and time. For a good few months I was writing commission stuff nearly every single day.
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Well, I'm still glad you updated. I've read half of what you've written, and a full eighth of FiMfiction waiting on an update for this particular story.
So, Penny for your thoughts and a Farthing for your time?
Oh just wait until they make this a business! Save a species, control your diet, gain a friend you can really bond with and talk to!
Keep going! ;)
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You can pm those can't you?
Sequel please!
Rainbow is going to lord being the first willing human host over Applejack, isn't she?
Keep going! ;)
SEQUEL!!
Is the alp-luachra based off of a real creature, mythical or otherwise?
8354128 It is based off a beastie from Celtic myth I believe, but this one is (with permission) based off Badumsquish's art:
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Hmm. A mud-based, magical parasite ... was this your practice run for SBPS? :-)
This is so much like the start of a cult.
9877011 A happy, belly-snuggling cult!