While Sora and Riku were on thier quest to put a stop to Xehanort's plans, the Master Yen Sid summoned them to go into a mission in a new world which have a source of light that it's under threat by Xehanort. The result of this mission would have a big impact in the upcoming final battle so the two heroes can't afford to fail on this mission...
Sunset Shimmer and her friends are having a good lives after the friendship games, but she has been feeling weird lalely, the feeling that something bad it's about to happen. A new threat, worse that any other foe, will come, she also feel that she and her friends gonna need new alies to help them out, also she has been feeling that it might be time to go out and look for somebody to make her happy, her hero...
Sci-Twilight Sparkle is trying to get used to her new life and learn about the friendship, but she's having a hard time trying to, also she feels more isolate than ever to the people from her past actions, the fault is eating her up, even with her family and her friends trying to help her there's not great effect on her, what she needs now is someone that can help her and fill her with light, she needs a hero...
Takes Place after Friendship Games and in the beginning of KH3
Kingdom Hearts belongs to Disney and Square Enix
Artwork by GundamBrony
Simple And Clean -Ray of Hope MIX belongs to Square Enix and Utada Hikaru.
FURZT.
Also, goody, a crossover with KH!
very well done i cant wait for new chapters
Good chapters
but i suggest somthing, that Twilight gets a Keyblade and Riku tell about his battle with Roxas and the case of Sora and Ventus, because i read the chapter and Sora repair the Twilight's hearts with his heart, but i have a question, he unit his heart with her or he repeir the heart of Twilight
Nice start on the story, but I think you need to check the grammar and how to phrase the sentences. Other than that, good luck with the other chapters
good story but no offence there are a lot of grammatical errors if it's okay with you guys i can proofread your future chapters if your okay with that i mean
6592819 Thank you friend,the problem is that i'm from latino america,i then to make mistakes several time
6592700 Thanks :D
6592764 i'm from latino america and i'm 16 years old,i tens to do mistakes several times,i do what i can
6593513 well like I said I can proofread your story I'm very precise
6592750 well in Dream Drop Distance Lord Ansem The Wise said that Sora can heal the hurt from the people's heart,that's where i get the idea,also Sci-Twilight get her heart craked by the darkness she absorbed when she turned into Midnight
6592222 Thanks :D
6592222 Thanks :D
6593511 your welcome so in your universe sora never meet equestia form twilight that pretty intresing
6593779 actually he will,but not yet
6593832 i know he will but all the events of cantalot high already happen and sora didn't get involved until now that cool i like that it very different but remember destiny doesnt lead to chance
6593853 Trust me,you will be surprise,There's more light that meets the eyes
6593868 lol all i hope so anyway today the big day the kingdom hearts event in japan it starts 10pm for me that centural time i dont where you live
6593875 You will be surprised as all of us
6593887 so are you looking foroward for the kh news today at the kingdom hearts event in japan for d23
6593895 of course,i'm need Riku's KH3 outfit,also UX relase dte,0.2 news and KH3 new trailer
6593909 i think we see outfits as for uncahined x they can release anytime they want, as 0.2 that almost a guantee i tihnk yoko will perfome new music there and top with a new kh 3 trailer with news worlds it a hour and half event so anything is possible
Nice... I've got my eye on you.
6596326 Thanks
6596807 Your welcome pal. Love the story.
6597151 and it's only the tip of the iceberg,you're gonna love the rest of it
6597249 Sweet stuff!
"Safeguard, a source of light"
"And"
I'm terribly busy at the moment, so this was what I could manage at the moment. I'll look into it later, in better detail, when I have more time.
6597455 thanks dude,even if it's small every word means much
Can give me someone a short explanation about the new Twilight, and why they transformed this time?
I admit I somehow didn´t enjoyed every episode after Tirek, and I´m not sure how much I like Equestria girld, and the fact that they don´t even seems to need Twilight to transform after the first time, but yes I only need a more or less quick explanation to start this fanfiction.
I don´t want to watch the movie till I finished season 5, but I guess I don´t really need to wait right?
6600629 That's not and the same that it's she,that the Twilight that came from the human world as the one for Equestria will appear later
wow man this is getting good and sci twiligh is roxas if you think about it
6605853 nah he's just too much like him except that she had the chance that he never had
6605860 well if kh 3 gets a good endning roxas will become his own person so will xion and namine they all desvea chance at being there own person just sci twilight
6605881 well i wish too, but it's ok the way that are thing for now, they would return, but maybe like gohst,but maybe Sora can bring them back, but for now the thing are ok the way they are
So I think this story will have riku x sunset, but is it gonna be sora x twilight or flash x twilight?
6605881
No they won't
I WONT ALLOW IT
6607109 well i'm ok how things are now, i know the will retunr, but most likely in a non-physical way,but it would be cool that they bacame their own person,but fo now i prefer the thing the way they are
6606846 Sci-Soralight (Sora x Sci-Twlight) and well i've think it could be Flashlight (Pony/Human Twilight)
6607109 it going to happen they are going to become there own person at the the of kh3 once sora finds a way to unlock the key to return hearts
6607217 who knows maybe yes, maybe not but i don't convice untill i saw it myself
First you need to capitalize E in Equestria, then you need to fix the word 'Firts' it is spelled First. You have 2 other spellings of this. Also aready is spelled 'Already'. Also comon is spelled 'common' Also you need to capitalize all i's. So from this i to this I. Lastly you need to have a space in between words that have a apostrophe so from,this to, this. Hope this helps out.
Not trying to be darude or anything.
6607230 thanks :D
6607205 isnt weird that sora and twilight ship has the world light in it meaing soralight
6607356 nope, for me not since Sora it's the Light's Hero
6607217
Welp I'm done
I wonder if I'll be in Kingdom Hearts IV
6607410 Eeyep
6607355 No problem pal. Can't wait for more.
6607584 next Chapter: Firts Day of School it would be done soon
6607453
Oh I forgot
Kingdom Hearts III is my last game
6607843 but not mine, Sorry i'm i gonna end you, this it's m story and you're not part of it anymore