As Seen on TV

Ted is watching the new season of MLP and slavishly goes through the intro, frame by frame, when something catches his eye. Could it be?

Part of the Silver Verse.

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Seeking Dusk

Seeking Dusk #1 · Mar 30th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Jake left it all behind, Ted left it all behind and The Text can use the internet.

The last one concerns me greatly

Alzrius

Alzrius #2 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · ·

"Yo Ted, whatcha want?" asked his bigged roommate from across the room at his own computer.

Shouldn't that be "his bigger roommate"?

Ted went pale, which wasn't much difference from his usual pale self. He hit reply/

I think that's supposed to be a colon, rather than a slash at the end of the sentence.

He threw the ticket to the ground and angrily stuffed his pockets with the likely worthless money.

The money is "likely-worthless."

With a deep breath, he moved to scout out the cities and its possibilities, determined to make the best of the situation, or maybe have a good cry.

Shouldn't that be "city" instead of "cities"?

David Silver

David Silver #3 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · ·

5803079 He thought he made perfectly reasonable requests!

David Silver

David Silver #4 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · ·

5803143 Fixed, though I feel a special shame for so many errors in so little text.

Alzrius

Alzrius #5 · Mar 30th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5803163 Nobody's perfect. Certainly Ted isn't, no matter how madly he air-guitars when things are excellent.

albedoequals1

albedoequals1 #6 · Mar 31st, 2015 · 1 · ·

Haha, you have to be careful how you word your wishes when dealing with facetious pan-dimensional beings. Even if it had respected his intent rather than his exact wording, he asked for two things, so he'd be stuck regardless. It's kind of funny that the reaction he got from the ponies was pretty much, "Oh, great, another one." David, Jake and Ted may not be the only ones.

David Silver

David Silver #7 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5804007 I admit, I more imagined them as being jaded New Yorkers, who were more annoyed that he was in the way more than anything else.

albedoequals1

albedoequals1 #8 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

Cut that LoL crap a second and come check this out!

Is LoL an actual thing, or a parody of WoW? (Land of Legumes?)

David Silver

David Silver #9 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5804062 League of Legends.

albedoequals1

albedoequals1 #10 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5804077 Eh, I've never been good with acronyms.

drone_r0m-3

drone_r0m-3 #11 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5803187 But without his good friend Bill, this may turn out to be a most bogus journey.

David Silver

David Silver #12 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5804601 Bah, is that a rare name?

drone_r0m-3

drone_r0m-3 #13 · Mar 31st, 2015 · 1 · ·

5804629 The Ted that air-guitars when things are excellent is a reference to Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure and it's sequel Bill & Ted's Bogus Journey. So that's why I mentioned that.