Fluttershy's friends might call the gentle pegasus sensitive. But they don't know the half of it. What is she always so afraid of, anyway? And why is SHE the one pony who can go toe-to-toe with the Avatar of Chaos himself?
Fluttershy has been called weak and useless for as long as she can remember. Though she doesn't show it, she's been hurt by every insult. And she's getting desperate.
420783 I intended for her to be a little slow. I would not go so far as to say fully autistic, but the combination of her age, and her being an introvert made this feel right for me.
I hope nopony is insulted. And I am so very very glad you liked the story.
I'm missing some characters here, like the bullies that mock RD (like during the sonic rainboom episode and cutie mark chronicles) and i miss Gilda in this story.
Idk, the bullies did not seem to recognize Fluttershy, they knew rd from flight school. I don't want to write a plothole that i recognize beforehand. As for Gilda, I don't like her. If I write a RD story, I'll include them, deal?
Interesting. You got my attention. One thing though: was it your intention on making Fluttershy a bit autistic?
I like the story though, so please, continue.
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I intended for her to be a little slow. I would not go so far as to say fully autistic, but the combination of her age, and her being an introvert made this feel right for me.
I hope nopony is insulted. And I am so very very glad you liked the story.
Thank you for commenting
420812 You're welcome.
I'm missing some characters here, like the bullies that mock RD (like during the sonic rainboom episode and cutie mark chronicles) and i miss Gilda in this story.
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Idk, the bullies did not seem to recognize Fluttershy, they knew rd from flight school. I don't want to write a plothole that i recognize beforehand. As for Gilda, I don't like her.
If I write a RD story, I'll include them, deal?
Really reminds me when I had a temptation to play in the grounds instead of staying in class during Kindergarden about 15 years ago.
so is fluttershy and spitfire related?
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I'm curious as to how you came to that conclusion.
Spitfire is related to somepony else
>>rasta-gringo
because they are have a yellow coat
Oh hell.
That is creepy as anything.
I don't know where you're going with this, but I feel compelled to follow along.
The way this story goes from adorable to sad to horrifying and back at the flick of a switch beggers belief.
I'm out of words. Keep going, the story is awesome so far.
So much rhyming. (Which is not a bad thing) My head is full of derp.