Rainbow Dash hasn't spoken to her parents since her 18th birthday. She's never been good at forgiving and/or forgetting but her friends push her towards reconciliation on Mother's Day.
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4374820
"Ever" is probably non-applicable, as it was only published today.
4375024
For that matter it was only written today too. I started writing it about 11:30AM and published it about seven hours later.
This.....was dull to read
4374820 There'b no chance of this making it to Equestria Daily, their standards are way too high
Eh.
4376132 Well... Do you plan on submitting it, anyway?
Okay look, my gripe with this isn't about Rainbowshine. I couldn't care less about that. I didn't know about her either and I'm sure if I was being careless, I would've made the same mistake. Mostly, I just have to agree with one of the previous statements. Dull. Ish? I don't know. I liked the flash backs. It was going well for me until the end. Whatever was being sold, I was sooo not buying. Anticlimactic I guess. Great setup. I just wanted more. Or less. Just that scene with her parents threw me off.
4379255
Could you be more specific? Were you expecting some sort of confrontation?
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I'm sorry - I had to cut the car chase through the fireworks factory out due to time constraints.
4379221
Not particularly. While I do participate in some of the EqD WTGs if the prompt is to my liking, I'm not really a huge fan of that site.
Honestly, if the MLP message board I post on had a fanfic section I wouldn't be here, either.
This was well written, but I kind of expected a bit more on the ending.
Plus, now I'm not sure what I prefer Rainbow's actual middle name to turn out to be: Miriam or Jennifer.
I keep coming back to this fic for some reason, and every time I do, I feel like I'm about to favorite it once again (A while ago I did a bit of a purge of my favorites bookshelf, removing fics that I didn't think I'd enjoy again, and this was one of them), and then i keep running into the same issue:
The ending just feels like it cuts off.
I know this fic is 6 years old (with some editing to make it more compliant with Parental Glideance after that episode aired), but it still feels incomplete without going into detail about the reconciliation itself.