The new band Deathclop is making a splash in Canterlot -- a splash of blood, from the ponies they eat at every show! So why is Fluttershy their new lead singer?
When they're given backstage passes to the next show, can her friends save her from a life of darkness? Can they even save themselves?
Scary scenario
Are all the monsters part of the cannon? I might need to pay more attention.
3969791 Kelpies are weedy-horse-things with white eyes....... that's all I know.
3969791 Sirens and Kelpies are D&D/mythological monsters but haven't shown up in the show. I've seen them several times in other fanfics tho.
Pretty good, though I think Chrysalis got chumped pretty quickly for someone who beat Celestia. Sure, she's not full of Shining Armor's miracle love, but the adoration of the audience has to count for something.
First, kudos on giving the other members of the band a little character besides 'plain evil'.
Second, I can't tell if Chrysalis is talking food only or if I'm seeing Fluttershy/Chrysalis for the first time.
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almostwant to see a short follow-up where Fluttershy forces Chrysalis to apologize now.4583903 I wanna see Fluttershy make Chrysalis apologize, yes!
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Yeah, on second thought, I'm striking the almost from that statement. A short bit where Fluttershy makes Chrysalis apologize would be excellent.
It was well written but the story - especially after the concert part - was very weak and not exciting even for a bit. Pinki-ex machina...
MY WORST FEAR, A GIFT SHOP
huh interesting, I'll say the least