A "Naruto" crossover. Rather then dying at his brother's hands Itachi is instead sent to a world wholly unfamiliar to him, will he finally find peace within himself among the ponies of Equestria?
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The premise isn't terrible at first glance, but the manner in which Itachi actually reaches Equestria is . . . unbelievable, in a bad way. There is absolutely no reason why Madara would want to send Itachi to a whole other world.
Spelling and grammar also need some work.
I love these! They always leave me wanting the next one!
Hmm...Itachi and pony.Are you on drugs
Wy is Itachi taking this so well?
4083 Uhhhhhh.... no?
this was amazing!
Sweet Celestia, I just can't stop reading this!
I'll admit that I was a little confused when I first stumbled upon the description of this story but you have managed to spin a convincing crossover. I look forward to reading more about this! 
Also, Itachi/Luna for the win. 
Cool another Naruto Fanfic, I'm working on one myself, feel free to check it out
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/897/The-Tale-of-KyuubiDash
i haven't really watched naruto this makes me wanna watch it to understand half the stuff that's going on lol but other than that i like this story
Is this the last chapter? The way you wrote it made it look that way.
this was finished ages ago and only barely has it popped up? its good btw very good, i wonder why EqD took it off though when it got on
@DS no it isnt the last, this fic is finished and i dont know why they havent put the rest of the chapters
I like the story so far. I'm not sure if I like ItachixLuna shipping.
Oh well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
" I am going to crush you, and throw you into the wind."
Best use of a Dragon Ball reference ever.
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thanks! you might be the first person to ever catch that, or at least you're the first to mention it.
I'm glad that i found that story, it was definitely NOT waste of time!
When halfway through the last chapter, when Itachi died, i was thinking it's gonna be sad ending, but later I was proved wrong (Was a bit suprised... 
)! I REALLY hope you write more of this story, or at least sequel, because I'm curious, what happens next! 
As DrahcirAloer said, keep writing, want to read whatever you write! 
Oh, and I think EqD lost a great story... (Maybe it's just my opinion, but I really think that!)
why am i crying... WAAAAAAA!
sequel?
42921 Yep, that's the plan. I probably will start writing again once winter break starts up in a couple weeks so be on the lookout for more chapters
was kinda skeptical at first (i mean seriously of alll thing) but it turns out it was prty well written and was prty good
you have appesed pinky pie
OMG THIS STORY IS SPECTACULAR!!! SIR, U ARE A GENIUS... BRAVO MY GOOD SIR, I APPLUAD YOU!!!
5 STAR STORY RITE HERE GUYS!!!!
story was touching, though i used to read naruto mags untill i found ponies.... really good keep up with this please
i totally didn't cry when itachi died... or at the ending.... fuck you guys these be manly tears.....
Lol u so stole
"Wait, was this conversation all happening inside my mind?"
"Of course it was, but that doesn't make it any less real does it?"
from harry potter
i'm not gunna lie this is the second time i'v read this
cant wait for it to come of hiatus
dear mr Bronyof Steel
that was ont of the most awsome and wonderful
stories i have ever read and (about to) re-read
the amont of joy i got from reading this is
unable to be put in to words so the words above
are a weak atempt to do so i apoligize
i look forword for more to come
Scencerly
Elijah bleu Casey
Hey I really liked this story. Great work.
I'm surprised more people haven't read this.
The grammar is perfect, save for a couple missing commas, and the plot doesn't seems too convoluted, if you're willing to assume Madara actually can transport people through the multiverse.
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WAT.
So where does the Sauske alicorn come in?
I think Itachi is being a TAD to EMOTIONAL, you don't need to CAPITALIZE a word because it has EMOTIONAL weight. And the other are window dressing. They have no place in this story and I think you put the tags there to get more views.
Dun dun DUN!...dramatic effect. Cheesy yet a fan Favorite.
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Yep. I sense some Run-On sentences in there
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Bravo good sir, nice story.
So... No more Jutsu for Itachi...?
46013 Interesting, on FanFiction.net it says complet...but it will continue you say... Good...good...
462933 Maybe, maybe not. It is Itachi, if anypony could find a way it would be him. Also, he likely still has his Sharingan.
152054 Considering his untold power with the Sharingan,plus this is a fic, sure why not? Anyway, BACK TO READING!
It has been about 22 weeks since you said it'll continue... Meh, I'm willing to wait. This story ROCKED!
HOT DAMN
HOT DAMN
I'mmmmmm Baaaaaaack!
I remember reading this on Fanfiction! Love it!
SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!!! AHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH BOOOOOOOOIIII!!!! THIS IS LIKE THE 3RD SEASON OF DAVE CHAPELLE I NEVER GOT TO WATCH. CAPS LOCKZ FTW!!!!
Holy shit this updated? Um. I...Buh? *Reads*
1141329 I'm reminded of that ponygeist billboard that the hub did once..
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It's called Canterlock! Where you been?
AWWWWWWWWWWWW YEAH!
1 word more
ERHMAHGERD MOAR!
Also, when will Sasuke appear in the story?
The cover art suggests as such.
I just read all the chapters, and I just have a few critiques before I follow this story.
Part of what makes a fight scene awesome and gripping is not knowing what's about to happen next. Don't tell us everyone's intentions in a fight. It spoils the fun. A little tip is to think of yourself as nothing but a TV screen that only supplies sight, hearing, taste, touch, and smell. Do not go any further.
Don't just say, "and she explained this." That's a cop-out that does no good to your story. Either end the chapter there, have something else going on to attract our attention, or at least describe what's happening while the explanation is going.
Your time skips are ridiculous. It creates a sort of disconnect between the reader and the story. Don't cop-out like that. Write them. Annoying, yes, but this also brings up more possibilities to occur in your story. For example, instead of skipping the whole training sequence Itachi is giving the Mane 6 for the fight against Nightmare, you could show a couple of those with a smaller plot going on (like Twilight having a crush on somepony but is too scared to do anything about it, or the Cutie Mark Crusaders getting into some form of trouble that Itachi has to bail them out of). This allows us to see the characters actually interact with Itachi and watch as they affect each other. For example, we could see Itachi training the Cutie Mark Crusaders in the arts of Taijutsu (little Rock Lees. On second thought, I don't think Ponyville could handle that). Try to avoid using time skips, and you'll have great content for us to latch onto and laugh at, giving us a better connection to the characters.
Welp. That's all I've got to say. Looking forward to seeing more stuff. Itachi really is one of the best characters from the Naruto series. Nice to see him explored.