Not sure how the "read unsubmitted" function is supposed to work, but I set a password if you'd like to give me some comments on my longfic.
The longfic is an AiE (yeah, yeah, I know) focusing on action with a medical twist. Gore and violence abound, but not to the point where you'll cut yourself on an edge. Sci-fi and biohorror elements as well. Give it a look!
Hyperlink to the WIP: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/553937/malpractice
Password:letmeseeit
I usually write one or two chapters then go back to edit. If you notice one of the newer beta chapters is choppy, I just haven't been back to revise, but still feel free to comment on it.
Any comments are appreciated. Mainly looking for things regarding overall story flow as well as spotting any glaring issues in pacing, formatting, and general feel.
Smell you later.