This story is a sequel to Rap battle of the Blood moon
Pinkie in all her excitement decided to hire the hardest to book rapper in all Equestria, Notorious B.U.G. for their Hearth’s Warming party. Twilight knows that B.U.G. is really Queen Chrysalis in disguise. Will she need to keep her friends safe this season or will Pinkie’s faith in the magic of the holiday and code of performer professionalism win out?
Written for for Visharo for Jinglemas 2023
Hope this surprises you!
Good ol' reliable Cheese goes well with Ms. Cheese Legs over here!
Oh, they are such great antagonistic characters to each other, which is not explored in fanfiction nearly enough in my opinion
She said, keeping up the beat effortlessly
Seeping in the bone marrow. You can tell that she would've absolutely love to playfully screw with ponies, if she wasn't bent on hating them
My wounds are self-inflicted.
For Pinkie 'making with love' have a literal sense
I tried to imagine it in detail. An absolute delight.
This fic is a blast! Kudos!
Many thanks, Short!
I really appreciate you spending time to write this in such a short amount of time, guess you did your name justice! Really tho, this was sweet and the fic was awesome. Like Forcalor said, kudos!
I can't help but remember that the real rapper you took her handle from died violently. Of course, Chrysalis wouldn't have it any other way.
D'awwww, that was sweet.
What a fun, sweet story. Someday B.U.G. needs to battle comics-canon rapper Starswirl the Bearded. (Li'l Swirly?)
Ponyville... it’s big enough to called a town, "village" is a little too
muchless.What was that last one ?
Not that guy!
Zecora said, keeping the beat.
A pony that wasn’t really... what? Fun?
Spike digging his claws into her doesn’t sound playful, it sounds painful, but maybe I'm getting it wrong.
Comma after "Hi."
Well, she is married to Twilight, that means she’s the second Princess (consort) of Love!
"Beaming like a Hearths Warming tree"? What?
Not that guy! (I’m going to call Cheese Sandwich this from now on)
Also, didn’t Chrysalis like ponies calling her a monster?
Also, there shouldn’t be a gap between the hyphen and "horse"
Comma after "Warming."
We passed it already
A fitting sequel, skipped the rap, though, didn’t feel like it, but I’m sure it was good. The characterisation of Twilight and Pinkie was good, Chrysalis' characterisation was... strange, she went from "fear me mruahahaha" to "AH'M NAWT A MAWNSTER, AH'M JUS' MISUNDERSTOOD," maybs it was just strange because we didn’t get to see the character development after the Blood moon rap battle.
Why wasn’t I invited to the wedding?
This gets a "GOOD" from me!