How would Equestria fare with an alien that commands a powerful army?
USGF, the name of the armed U.S force that is known and feared by the entire world (even the slightest mention will scare people), the shortened form of the United States Galatic Force, and controlled by an alien??? But what happens if that alien is teleported to Equestria, is then treated terribly by some, AND while a new threat shows up that could destroy Equis and Earth? What can possibly go wrong???
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Contains gore, light profanity, and suggestive subjects.
LOCATION: USGF HEADQUARDERS, WASHINGTON, DISTRICT OF COLUMBIA (WASHINGTON D.C) TIME: 1300 HOURS DATE: 5/3/2016
"Alreight gentalemen!" Yelled a tall, skinny Navy Captin with a french accent standing next to a stand to his crew insight of the Aircraft Carrier U.S.H United States, surrounded by 1 destroyer, 1 patrol boat, 1 crusier, and by 1 battleship. "Zeis 'cerrier eis state-of-the-art and if zou noticed, we have ze higher-ups of ze militory branch USGF behind moi, ze shadows in ze water near ze corners, as well as ze odd engines in ze control room. Ze Americons has claimed zis 'carrier for zemselves for reasons, as well as another 'carrier for ze Navy. Scourge, if you may?"
"Gladly." Replied a yellow humanoid cat, wearing a black sleeveless jacket and blue jeans as it walked up to the stand. Scourge struggled for a second to get on the stool that was placed behind the stand (because Scourge is about 3½ feet tall, versus the 6 foot tall adult human). After Scourge was able to stand on the stool, he started his speech.
"My fellow Airmen, Marines, Army men, Seamen, and Coast Guards men, when the foundin' fathers helped create this glorious nation, they relied on the patriots to defend this nation, which they did. Everytime America was attacked, soldiers like you went and completed that one eternal misson, to protect America and her intrests. We always needed the tech to fight for it, but also the men willin' to die for it. Now, advances in technology has given us this,"
Suddenly, the Aircraft Carrier, followed by the fleet, started to lurch as the scared Seamen looked on. Then, something amazing happened,
The ships flew.
Each had 2 engines that were as large as a city block on each side. the largest, the Aircraft Carrier U.S.H United States, started to fly toward Scourge and the awe-struck Seamen.
"Welcome to the Heli Age. They are called by these names, the heli-destroyer," Said Scourge as he pointed at the hovering destroyer, "The heli-crusier, Patrol-heli, Battle-heli, and finally, the Helicarrier. To help everyone out, the 'heli's are the flying form of the original. Questions?"
"Why arn't they falling apart? Because I'm sure the engines produce the flight." A sailor that raised his hand asked.
"Correct, and the heli-ships are made out of Socanium, which was recently discovered." Replied Scourge.
Socanium is a combination of Titanium, Vibranium, and plasma (like the STAR WARS™ kind). It is 50% lighter than carbon tubes and even more stronger than it COMBINED with Titanium and Vibranium (give or take by 1,000% more). But it costs twice more then Titanium to produce a square foot. Scourge stepped off the stand and boarded the awaiting helicarrier...
"Yes, Grimy Gears?" Asked Princess Celestia to a tan pegasus that had green eyes, with a gear and a wrench as his cutiemark. Right next to him was a machine labled P-TM9001.
"My ruler," Said Grimy Gears, "I have invented a machine that can teleport between planets without the use of magic!"
Princess Celestia raised an eyebrow. She then said,
"May we see it work?"
"Sure, my ruler."
With that, Grimy Gears trotted to the machine and turned it on. The machine came on with lights blazing when it made a concerning sound,
*Grrrreeeaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkk!*
"That's not supposed to happen." Said a scared Grimy Gears as he started to try to shut the machine down as it made more sounds before it blew up in a white light.
"Sorry, my ruler." Grimy Gears apologized to a shocked Princess Celestia that was looking at the smoldering black mini crater where the machine once stood just before he ran out of the castle...
I wonder how Princess Celestia likes her red carpet having a smoldering hole on it?
=•=
LOCATION: ATLANTIC OCEAN, U.S.H United States TIME: 1350 HOURS DATE: 5/3/2016
"Are you sure?"
"Bingo, partner. She is built out of Socanium. Heck, she can survive hell." Replied Scourge to his Second-in-Command. The Second-in-Command nodded and pressed a button.
*Fwish!*
The hangar opened to reveal a heavily modified A-10 Thunderbolt II (requested by Scourge to the U.S government as his personal aircraft) labled American Thunderbolt. Scourge got in.
"Time to take this puppy for a test spin." Said Scourge as he started the engines up.
{Ready to go, Sonic.} Said the radio operater (via radio).
"Roger that, Tango."
{Roger.}
With that, Scourge flew off the helicarrier.
At Mach 3.
"WOOOOOOHOOOOO!" Yelled Scourge as the American Thunderbolt reached Mach 3.
{Uh, Sonic,} Said Scourge's radio, {You've been surrounded by an energy.}
Scourge's ears perked up.
"What?" He replied.
{It seems that-}
The radio was cut short.
*BOOM!*
"WARNING! WARNING!" Yelled the computer, "ALL ENGINES ARE OFF-"
The last thing that Scourge saw before he crashed into the sea was a bright light...
=•=
LOCATION: A FIELD NEAR PONYVILLE TIME: 1400 HOURS DATE: 5/3/2016
"ON YOUR MARK, GET SET, GO!" Yelled Ditzy 'Derpy' Hooves as she waved the starting flag. Exactly 0.4 miliseconds later, Rainbow Dash and Lightning Blitz soared passed her with a sonic blast. Ditzy was almost sucked to the ground caused by the 2 pegasi.
"HA!" Yelled Rainbow Dash as she was already a mile ahead of Lightning Blitz. All too-wait, isn't Lightning Dust supposed to be– Rainbow Dash thought before she was interrupted with a bright flash (at this point, she was over the part where the Everfree Forest was near Ponyville).
What...The...Buck? Thought Rainbow Dash as she looked in front of her...
=•=
LOCATION: ? TIME: 1405 HOURS DATE: 5/3/2016
*Swoomp!*
Wha? Thought Scourge as he looked around confused.
Scourge looked at the Mach meter.
Mach 23
MACH 23?! Scourge barely had time to react when he looked up.
He was about to hit a cyan rainbow-maned Pegasus.
Time slowed...
Scourge forced the joystick down...
Just as the American Thunderbolt reached passed the Mach table, it also crashed into the ground outside of the forest, opening the cockpit and sending an uncouncous Scourge flying for 25 meters and hitting the ground...
The cyan rainbow-maned Pegasus saw all of this just before flying to Ponyville to get help,
That help would be in the form of a purple alicorn...
Location: Castle of Friendship, Ponyville, Equestria 1500 Hours May 10th, 2016
"Guys!"
Princess Twilight Sparkle looked away from her friends to see Rainbow Dash come bolting in. Twilight was just chatting with her friends about the weird activity happening around the Everfree Forest. Rainbow Dash had a worried and scared expression on her face and was breathing pretty hard. It was about 15 seconds before Rainbow Dash spoke again.
"You are not going to belive what I just saw."
Rainbow Dash told her friend about the bet between her and Lightning Blitz, the race, and when the thing came from the sky.
"First, I was all like 'I have won', then I remembered that Lightning Blitz was supposed to be as fast as me, which she wasn't, then all of a sudden, I saw a BIG ball of white light-" Rainbow Dash paused for a breath, "And BOOM! There it was. IT. LITERALLY. WAS. FASTER. THEN. ME."
"What did it look like?" Asked Twilight.
"Well, It looked like a grey mustache..." Responded Rainbow Dash, "Then it nosed dived to the ground."
"Oh that poor thing!" Responded Fluttershy, "It must be hurt!"
"Uh, yeah," Said Rainbow Dash, "If it's head didn't open and a creature flew out and landed a few yards away."
"Wait," Said Twilight, "A CREATURE FLEW OUT OF IT?!"
Rainbow Dash nodded.
"Girls, looks like we are going on a trip."
=•=
Area of impact 1520 Hours May 10th, 2016
"Ta-Da!" Yelled Rainbow Dash as the carridge she was pulling landed within sight of the crash site. The other Elements (as well as two guards) hopped out.
"WOW!" Said a shocked Twilight as she was already checking out the crashed object. The object looked as if it was made out of metal.
Twilight tapped the thing once with her hoof.
*Bong!*
Ok, its a machine. Thought Twilight, She tried to examine further when she heard Fluttershy squeal.
"Oh look at this poor creature!"
Twilight stopped her examination and trotted to what her friends were surrounding.
"..." Was all she could say as she looked at it.
It was a yellow cat that had two arms and legs that was wearing a black sleeveless jacket and blue jeans.
"What should we do with it?" Asked Fluttershy.
Twilight answered,
"Maybe at my place?
=•=
?
"Is it dead?"
What the... Thought Scourge.
"Pinkie!" Said a female voice.
"I'll take care of this poor creature." Said a soft, caring voice. The sounds of movement was heard, followed by a closing of a door.
Time to get up...
=•=
"What do we call it, Angel?" Asked Fluttershy to her pet rabbit. Angel had a small notebook as well as a pencil. Angel wrote in his notebook and showed the names he tried.
"'Fred'? No."
"'Earl'? Nah."
"Really Angel? 'Angel'?"
Angel almost gave up when he saw it start to move towards Fluttershy.
The alien was approching Fluttershy.
Angel wrote this to Fluttershy, which she read.
=•=
"Lo0k B3H1ND U." Read Fluttershy, *Crunch*
Fluttershy looked backwards and saw the alien was up and had stepped on a pencil (that was now broken). The alien looked up at her and said "Uh, I can explain..."
=•=
"Got any 8's?" Asked Applejack to her friends, who were playing Go Fish.
Suddenly, they heard a scream. Fluttershy's, to be more precise.
"Sorry miss!" Apologized Scourge to a screaming yellow Pegasus, who was now backed up in a corner.
"P-P-Please don't hurt me..." Wimpered the now scared Pegasus to Scourge.
"I won't, just where am I?"
"I-I-In the Castle of Friendship in Ponyville, Equestria."
"On Earth?"
"What? No, this is planet Equis"
Wait... Thought Scourge before he was interrupted by a loud noise.
"YOU WILL REGRET HURTING FLUTTERSHY, ALIEN!"
*Bam!*
Just then, a group of armored horses (that looks a lot like Spartan armor) bursted in.
Ok... Thought Scourge, Bunch of angry Spartan horses that can talk want to kill me, let's put that Spetnaz trainin' to use...
=•=
Once, Princess Luna was just playing some Go-Fish with the Elements,
That was before Fluttershy screamed.
Now, she, Shining Armor, and 5 Royal Guards were about to fight the alien. Luna noted that the alien was a yellow two legged and armed cat wearing clothes. The Royal Guards ran into the room. Shining Armor charged at the alien, horn first. Surely the alien was dead. But the alien had a nasty suprise in store. The alien grabbed an black L-shaped object from a pocket on it's leg and swung it over Shining Armor's head with a clear crack!, just before Shining Armor fell.
"Shining Armor!" Yelled the Royal Guard as they then charged the alien, who had put the object back. They all got suprises. The first had his front left leg grabbed by the alien, who threw him over the alien's head into the wall behind it. The guard fell. The second had the same treatment. The third was now on the alien. The alien fell and kicked the guard into the hallway. Then the remaining guards charged.
The alien jumped into the air, spinning like a profesional figure skater would do to impress the audiance over the guard's heads, and landed behind the guards on its legs. Then the alien took the guards out. A shocked Luna then said,
"WHY DID YOU KILL THEM?!"
"DIE, VARMIN!" Yelled an angry orange blob that smashed into the alien (that had a shocked look on its face and before it could respond).
"Wha-?" Said the alien that was now pinned down under the unmistakble form of Applejack.
"YOU WILL PAY FOR KILLIN' SHINING ARMOR, AS WELL AS THOSE GUARDS." Yelled a furious Applejack (that was snarling, yelling, and VERY ticked off) right at the alien's face. The alien's ears went back as it's green-blue pupils shrank.
=•=
"Applejack, enough." Commanded the night black alicorn. 'Applejack' did so (while giving him the stink eye).
"Creature," Said the night black alicorn, "Why have you killed our guards?"
Scourge got up and looked around the room. He saw 'Applejack' talking to the cyan rainbow-maned Pegasus he saw earlier. They both looked at him with pure hatred. Scourge then looked at the white unicorn he had 'killed', as well as the others.
"They are alive, I-" Answered Scourge as he looked back at the alicorn. The cyan Pegasus hit him in the face. HARD. Scourge cried in pain as he felt millions of invisible needles peirced into his right cheek. Then he felt the liquid.
=•=
First, it almost rammed into me, Thought Rainbow Dash,Second, it made me look slow and dumb. Third, it killed those guards and Shining Armor. Then it had to hurt Fluttershy. Buck you. In a fit of rage, Rainbow Dash took off and punched the alien in the right cheek. BOOM! Rainbow Dash felt great until she felt her left hoof feeling...wet and sticky. She look down.
There was red liquid on it.
"Well...That was a nice thank you present." Mumbled the alien as it was covering it's right cheek.
"R-Rainbow dash?!" Choked out Shining Armor's voice.
"Shining Armor? I thought you died!" Rainbow Dash said as she turned around and saw him.
"Nah, he only knocked us-" Said a guard before he saw the alien. "Holy Celestia..."
Rainbow Dash turned to her friends and Princess Luna. All their pupils were small with faces of shock on them. Suddenly Rainbow Dash realized what the red liquid was, her rose red pupils shrank.
It was blood.
Suddenly, the alien asked if there were any bandages, cotton balls, and alcohol.
"We do, but not unless you pay for harming Fluttershy. WELCOME TO PAINVILLE, ALIEN!!!." Said a guard just before he jumped on the alien beating it up (as well as 25 others).
The alien cried out as it was being beaten up. Luna didn't like it, but it had to be done.
"WHAT IS THIS?!" Yelled out a voice everypony knew.
It was the godess of the sun.
Instintly, all the guards jumped off of the alien and stood guard. At this point, all of the guards were covered in blood. So was the alien, who was crawling on the floor with an swollen eye, its yellow fur almost covered in crimson.
"This thing has harmed Fluttershy, we are teaching it a lesson." replied a guard, pointing at the alien. Suddenly, Fluttershy exploded her rage.
"No...It..DIDN'T!" yelled Fluttershy, making everypony flinch. "IT JUST ASKED ME WHERE IT WAS, NOW YOU HURT THE POOR THING!"
Everypony was caught completly off guard, Fluttershy never became THIS mad before, and now she is PROTECTING the alien. Fluttershy then trotted to the alien, helped it up on her back, then trotted out of the room.
"Come on, sweetie, let me nurse you back to health." Said Fluttershy sweetly to the alien as she trotted to her cottege.
"T-Thanks m-ma'am." Replied the alien, who was barely able to talk at this point.