Tusk's Equestrian time

by Wither

First published

Commander Tusk somehow gets teleported to Equestria, after being KIA. (Commander Tusk is my star wars clone trooper OC who will be having the time of his life in Equestria.)

"This is Commander Tusk, designation CT-996, requesting back up! Multiple KIA. It's just me and Private S- AAGH!" Tusk said as he crumpled to the ground, a fresh hole in his chest.

Note: Short description, I know, but i'm not so good at writing them. And also, since this is my first story, I would not like flame and would accept some tips. and my OC Tusk does not at all look like the image above. But it is the closest image that there was compared to Tusk. So to clear things up, Tusk's armor is colored a grey camo, with olive green highlights similar to that of Commander Fil's armor. He also has two painted tusks going down from his visor to his respirators. Tusk's respirators and face plate of his helmet were uncamouflaged.
(All ownership belongs to Lucasfilms/Disney and Hasbro/Lauren Faust respectively)

Well... Fierfek

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"Ugh" is all I get to say before I experience a searing pain in my chest."Oh BLAST, That hurts!" I yell as I wrap my arms around my chest and get into the fetal position. All I remember is defending Kamino, so that the clanker's couldn't get their hands on the last of Jango Fett's DNA. And then I remember being shot in the chest... So thats why I feel a lot of pain in my mid section. 'Welp, I guess its time to get up' I think, as I start to stand, which I immediately regret. But I tough through the pain and stand up, and the first thing I see is my Z-6 Rotary Blaster Cannon. "Glad I found you" I state out loud As I start to pick it up, the pain gets a lot worse in my chest, but once again I tough through it.

As I start to notice my scenery, I realize that I am in a pretty dense forest. And as far as I know, there is only two planets that have forest's as dense as this one. I then hear a couple of high pitched screams that snap me out of my sight seeing, so I let my instincts take control which ended up in me running towards were I last heard the screams. And the closer I got, I started to hear a lot of growling. So I put some more speed into my legs, and finally burst through some shrubbery and what I saw surprised me. I saw some carnivorous creatures seemingly made out of wood. The next things that caught my attention were three brightly colored live stock. There was fear very evident in there eyes, so I am guessing that they made the scream. So I did what my brain was telling me to do, and that was kill these creatures.

I quickly set my eyes on the biggest one, which I could only tell was their leader. So I rev'd up my cannon and blasted it to a flaming clump of wood. When it fell, the others noticed me, and turned there attention to me, along with the other, more colorful creatures. The wooden creatures started to circle me, and growl and bark, revenge evident in their glowing green eyes. So I quickly got in a battle stance. The first creature lunged at me, which ended up with its head being smashed by my cannon. Another did a fake lunge, which I fell for. And that meant my left arm got bitten by one of the creatures. With my arm numb, and blood coming out of it, I deemed it useless as of now. So I dropped my Z-6 and with my right arm, I pulled out my DC-17 Hand Blaster which was luckily still in it's holster, and started shooting the creatures. As I kept firing, I noticed two of the wood creatures backed up, and started to go towards their original meal. So as one of creatures jumped at me, I jumped as well, placed a boot on its head, and vaulted off of it.

As I land, I hear a sickening crack, 'well, i wasn't expecting to land here' i thought, as I see that I landed one of the creatures backs, probably breaking it's spine. So I put a shot in the creature's head, and turned to the next one. When I saw it, it was all ready in the air, nearly on top of me. So I acted fast and tried to roll away, but I wasn't fast enough. And soon enough, the creature was on top of me, biting hard on my left shoulder, making me feel a lot of pain. I try to get it it off by hitting its head with my pistol, but all that did was made its grip tighter. Which made me do the only reasonable thing to do in this situation. I Put a hole in the side of the creature's head. As I role the creature off of me, I turn to see the last of the them running away. I then notice all the blood I lost. I hear something similar to footsteps as my vision starts to go black. the last thing I saw were the three creatures colorful heads loom over me. And I mutter one last thing before I lose my consciousness, "Well...Fierfek".

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3rd person, CMC

"Wha-what is it? And did it just sp-speak?" asked Sweetiebelle.

"I have know idea, but I do know one thing",

"Whats that?" asked Applebloom,

"It's that this.. Thing saved our lives, and we need to repay it" Scootaloo said.

"How we gonna do that?",

"Simple, we take it to Fluttershy and ask her to patch it up!".

"Are you sure that that's the best option? i mean, isn't Fluttershy, you know, a bit, shy?" Applebloom asked.

"Well yeah, but c'mon! She's an animal expert. She's gotta know what this thing is, and how to take care of it!" replied Scootaloo, "Plus, it did save our lives".

"Well, Ok I guess. But she better not freak out when she see's it!",

"She wont" replied Scootaloo. "Ok then, lets go!" Yelled Sweetiebelle.

After some time, the CMC finally got out of the Everfree.

"GEEZ! This thing weighs a ton!" Groaned Sweetiebelle.

"Uuuh, guys. I don't know if you've noticed, but this things arm has gotten a lot redder since we started to drag it out of the Everfree" Said a concerned Applebloom.

"Oh... Well lets not waste anymore time! We don't want it to die! Look, there's Fluttershy's cottage! We need to get there! Fast!" Yelled Scootaoo

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3rd person, Fluttershy

As Fluttershy was sitting at a table, reading an animal magizine, She suddenly heard KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK "EEP! Hmm, now who could that be?" questioned Fluttershy as she opened her door.

In need of assistance

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As the door creaked open, Fluttershy heard 3 high pitched voices yell simultaneously, "FLUTTERSHY! WE NEED YOUR HELP"

"EEP! Girls you scared me. What do you need help with?" Asked Fluttershy

"WewanderedOffIntoTheEverfreeForest,TheABunchOfTimberwolvesCameAndSurroundedUs,ThenThisWeirdTwoLeggedCreatureCameAndSavedUsButGotBeatenUpReallyBad,SoWeBroughtItToYouSoYouCouldHelp t!" The CMC said all in one breath

"Girls slow down! So you're telling me that, You wandered off into the Everfree by yourself"

"Well yeah" The CMC say guiltily

"Then you get cornered by a pack of timberwolves? Why didn't you even go in there! It's dangerous there!"

"Well, we wanted to explore to get our cutie marks!" Said Apple bloom

"Yeah" Added Scootaloo

"Well I guess. But you also said a two legged creature?"

"Yeah! It just burst through the bushes, and started shooting these cool magical bullets at the timberwolves, and totally saved our lives!" Exclaimed Scootaloo

"But after it saved us, and scared off the timberwolves, we noticed it got injured." Said Sweetie belle

"Yeah, so we decided to take it to you, seein how you are an animal expert, so you could fix it up." Explained Apple bloom

"Well okay, Where is this creature?" Asked Fluttershy

"Its right behind us" Said the three fillies in anticipation

"Well okay then, lets see it" Said Fluttershy in a gentle voice. So as the three fillies moved out of the way to let Fluttershy see, they noticed a cream colored blur go over their heads. "Oh my! Quick girls, help me get it inside!"

"Is it that bad?" asked Sweetie belle

"Yes! The wound could be infected if you say it got it from a timberwolf!" Fluttershy said as she lifted the creature into the air, and onto the couch.

Fluttershy then quickly went into her back room, and came back with multiple medical items, such as gauze, band-aids, and pain killers. She quickly got to work wiping away the blood on it's left arm, put some disinfectant on the holes in it's oddly smooth hide. then proceeded to wrap the injured animal's arm with gauze to lessen the blood flow. After that was done, Fluttershy asked the three fillies that were silently watching to help her carry the creature to her bed. As Fluttershy settle's the creature down she hears Sweetie belle speak up. "Will it be all right?"

"Most likely. You girls can leave now, thank you for your help." Asked Fluttershy in a sweet manner

"Yeah, your welcome" The CMC said simultaneously walking downstairs and out the door. "now all I have to do is wait for you to wake up." Fluttershy said to the sleeping animal on her bed. "But first lets get a good look at you." Said Fluttershy as she got a proper examination of the creature on her bed. It had one T shaped eye, and a frown on it's face. It's hide was colored and shaded with grey squares and rectangles all across it's body with lines strewn about it's form the color of an olive. It had two curved tusk's on the bottom of it's head. On it's chest and shoulders, it had three plates of what seemed like iron? On it's hand it had five appendages similar to that of spike's claws. On it's waist it had some sort of half skirt, and also had long, somewhat pointed feet. All in all, very menacing to Fluttershy.

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1st person Tusk

I shoot upwards, in a cold sweat under my armor which, I must say, is very uncomfortable. Clones are conditioned to not have dreams, and only focus on the war, but oddly enough, I just experienced one. But I then take notice of my surroundings. Once again, I seem to wake up in some odd place. I notice how I am in some small place, and when I look down I notice that I am in some kind of cushiony bed two sizes to small. Then notice that my arm is wrapped with gauze, blood stained. So maybe that dream wasn't so much a dream at all. And if so Then, "Where the kriff am I?" As I ponder on the thoughts circulating in my head, I start to realize how badly my arm is injured, in full force. "Aaahh, that sting's." I say as I clutch my hurt arm. But I can't focus on that right now. Instead I need to figure out who took me in and or holding me hostage.

So I slowly start to get out of the small bed , but as I do, I start to hear faint noise, getting louder by the second. The noise stops outside the relatively small door, and then it opens, and the strangest creature comes through the doorway. I see that it is a cream colored quadruped with a pink maine. I hear it make a squeak, and see it retreat behind the door. I then hear a shaky and timid voice from behind the door. "H-hel-l-lo, a-a-are y-y-you a-awa-ake?. Questioned the voice. Could that have been the quadruped? Its not the most reasonable answer, and i'm sure any other man would be questioning their sanity. But i'm not taking any chances if I can get an explanation. So as I start to talk, I decide to take it gentle, seeing how the creature is probably afraid of me. "Are you talking to me?" I asked.

"Um, y-yes" The quadruped said as it turned it's head around the corner of the door.

"You don't need to be afraid Ok? I just want to ask some questions."

"O-ok. But I t-think that maybe we should be somewhere more comfortable, if that is okay with you of course."

"Yes, of course it is. But can I ask one question?"

"o-of course, if you want, that is."

"Yes, so, what's your name?" I ask.

"I-it's Fl-Fluttershy" Fluttershy said, timidly

"That's good, my name's Tusk."

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3rd Person/pony

As the sound of walking is heard going down the stairs, Fluttershy timidly steps off the stairs, followed shortly by a intergalactic soldier. As Fluttershy starts to walk towards her couch, she started to talk, "W-would you like t-to have a seat?" She asked timidly.

"Uuuuh, I don't think those chairs can hold up my weight, but thanks for the offer" Tusk said

"Oh, uuh, I-I see" Fluttershy said, blushing, as she took a seat.

"So, mind if I start asking some questions?", "S-sure"

"Okay, so what country and/or province am I in?"

"Y-you a-are currently in the country of E-Equstria, and I don't think there are really any provinces in Equestria"

'I have never heard of Equestria. Quite a ridiculous name if you ask me. Hmm, I wonder what sector this planet is located in?'

"Miss Fluttershy, I have been wondering, what sector is this planet located in" Tusk questioned, while eyeing her confused face

"What do you mean sector? The planet we are on is called Equuis, but t-that's all I know, I'm sorry if that's not the answer you wanted"

'Great, I have been somehow transported to a planet not known to the galaxy' "Do you have any space ports around here? Somewhere I can get back to the republic?" Asked Tusk.

"W-what's the republic? And what's a s-space port?"

'Great, just great. I've been transported to a planet not known to the galaxy, and they don't have any sort of space transportation.'

"Never mind Fluttershy. I have another question, what species are you exactly?" Asked Tusk

"W-well, i am a pegasus, but there are two other species which are the Earth pony's, and the Unicorns."

"OK Fluttershy, thank you for answering my questions. Do you have one of your own?"

"Um, actually, not really. But do you have a place to stay?"

Um, not really at this moment, no"

"O-oh, well since your injured, and don't have a place to stay, You could stay here" Said Fluttershy

"Hmm... You know Fluttershy, I don't want to impose- "Oh, no! no, you wouldn't be imposing, not at all!"

"Well okay Fluttershy, I guess it wouldn't hurt to stay a bit more"

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1st person Tusk

1 week later

It has been about a week since Fluttershy took me in, and I must say, it has been the time of my life. Although I miss the republic, and the excitement of being a soldier, I have accepted that I probably wont get back to it, if what Fluttershy said was right about not knowing anything about space, or having any space ports. Speaking of Fluttershy, she is the nicest being I have ever met. She took me in and helped me heal, and has told me all she knew about this countries history. Although I do find this term of "magic" a bit ridiculous, I somewhat believe it, if I haven't heard anything about the witch mother that General Windu fought. Then there are also the three fillies that saved me by bringing me to Fluttershy after the wolf attack. Apparently the wolves were called Timber Wolves, and are somehow actually made out of timber. Those three fillies that brought me to Fluttershys names were Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and scootaloo. The day after I questioned Fluttershy, and started my stay at her cottage, those three fillies came and asked Fluttershy if I was alright. As soon as we finished our introductions, I thanked them for helping me, but they countered my thanks with theirs. Now those fillies come along almost daily. We have become quite good friends.

"H-hey Tusk, I was wondering if-" Fluttershy was suddenly interrupted by a loud bang as the front door slammed against the side of the house, and three little fillies came running in. "FLUTTERSHY! You have trouble!"

"Girls, what are you talking about? What trouble?"

"I told Rainbow Dash how Tusk saved our lives, and then how we took him to you so that you could patch him up, but Rainbow Dash thought that Tusk was like, some sort of bad guy, and thought that you were gunna hurt Fluttershy, so she's rounding up her friends, and coming here!" Scootaloo explained

"W-well, I-I'm sure t-that w-we can e-explain it t-to them" Fluttershy said scarcely

"Oh no, I think I hear them coming! said Sweetie Belle, "Yep, I see them coming." Said Applebloom, while looking through Fluttershy's window.

"Tusk, you need to hide, fast!" Exclaimed Sweetie Belle

"I don't get why I would need to hide. Exactly"

"we don't wan't you to get hurt Tusk! So can you please just hide?"

"Pleeeeeease?" The CMC exclaimed

"Alright fine, but where exactly?" I questioned

"Uuuuuh... How about that closet?" Said scootaloo

Right as Scootaloo suggested that, we heard a knock outside the door, and a very farmer like voice coming from the other side, "Fluttershy! would ya mind openin this 'ere door?" Questioned probably one of Fluttershy's friends.

I quickly came to my conclusion on where to hide, "I'll take the closet" I said as I squeezed my way in.

"U-uh, j-j-just a m-moment" Fluttershy called.

"Listen, Fluttershy darling, we really need you to let us in to make sure you are fine!" I heard a high class voice say, muffled through two sets of door and wall.

"U-uh, o-okay". 'Fluttershy, why?' I questioned in my head as I heard the door open.

"All right! Where is this thing Fluttershy? Cus if I find it, it wont be standin for a week! cause no one hurts my friends!"

"Oh, um Rainbow dash, I don't think that will wont be necessary" Said Fluttershy timidly

"Ah sure hope it wont be necessary" Said the orange one as the new five ponies start to seemingly look around for me. 'Well I guess now is the time for observasions' I think as I take a look at the purple one. I notice that this one has both, wings and horn. Now I wonder what she could be? Moving on to the white one, I notice that her main and coat seem to shine. "Must keep clean" I mutter quietly. I move on, seeing how when I look at her, I can't really look. I then notice a very pink and bouncy one. All I know is that I have a bad feeling about her. As I look over to the orange one, a stetson hat immediately catches my attention. Now why would a pony be wearing a hat? Now that is a question for another time. I then look over to to the blue one that threatened me. And I must say, her rainbow main contrast's nicely with her coat. So that must be the Rainbow Dash Fluttershy told me about. Quit easy to identify.

I then hear the sound of hooves coming towards the closet that is currently my quite uncomfortable abode. 'Uugh, why does the bad stuff always happen to me?' I question whatever Deity is watching over me. The hoofsteps stop, and the closet door slowly slides open to reveal a rainbow maned pony. "Uuuuuuuh... Nice weather were havin?" I say to the Rainbow maned Pegasus. She slowly blinks to process what is going on, then suddenly shouts, "GET IT!" as she tries to grab my shoulders, but I duck and roll under her hovering body. But by doing so, I gathered every other being in the houses vicinity to notice me. So I run, hurdle Fluttershy's couch, and smash through her window, in turn making me run like mad. I get about ten yards off before a rainbow blur shoots over my head, and lands in front of me. So I stop running towards the pony in front of me, and start to run the other direction. I sprint past fluttershy's cottage and look behind only to notice a rainbow blur come barreling towards me. So I jump, noticing how the pegasus' original intent was to take out my legs, which ended up in her making a long ditch in front of me. I then notice the horned pegasus coming towards me. Or is it winged Unicorn? I'll figure it out later, as of now I need to get away from this purple pony. Suddenly as I am running away, a purple laser whizzes past my head and hits the ground in front of me. "Come back! We only want to ask some questions!" Yelled the pony flying behind me. 'You know, i'm gonna just not respond, considering how she's SHOOTING AT ME!' As another couple of lasers shoot past me, I notice the town that i'm entering. Maybe I can lose her in the streets? There is a lot of screaming happening around me, considering how i'm alien to the ponies around me, and sometimes hurdling over them. As I continue to run through the crowded streets of what I can only assume is the marketplace, considering the stalls, I notice a stall full of apples only a couple of feet away, so I tried to jump, and was to close to it. I ended up clipping most of my feet on it, and make it fall down carrying me with it.

As I start to stand, I notice that the orange, purple, and rainbow pony are back, and have surrounded me. I quickly get into a defensive stance and start to back up. But my way out is blocked by the stand I tipped over. "Listen, we don't want any trouble" Said the purple one.

"Well, then why did you try to shoot me?" I questioned.

"W-well, y-you see, we wanted to bring you to a better place to question you." explained the purple one.

"Then why didn't you ask?" I said

"BECAUSE WE KNOW THAT YOU WOUOLD TRY SOMETHING" Yelled the rainbow maned one, trying to shake some dirt out of her mane.

"What do you even mean try som- CLANG The clones sentence was cut short as a pink pony stepped into view behind the unconscious body of Tusk, holding a frying pan. "And Pinky saves the day again!" Exclaimed Pinkie Pie.

"Pinkie! Why did you do that?" Questioned Twilight Sparkle

"Well, I thought that you Dashie, and applejack could use some help with this... Thing!" Exclaimed pinkie Pie

"Well, we didn't okay, we were just going to ask it some questions, then bring it back to the castle." Said Twilight

"Ooooh. Whoopsie." Said Pinkie Pie sheepishly

"Uuugh. Well, we might as well just carry it back to the castle." Said Twilight, but was cut short of picking up Tusk by the sound of rapidly running hooves. "Twi, (puff) Twilight! Don''t do anything bad to- (puff) Ooh" Rarity said, as she came up to the scene, followed closely by Fluttershy. "What exactly happened here?" Questioned Rarity

"Well, I may have made a teensy mistake of nocking this thing unconscious when Twilight was starting to ask it some questions, so now we are taking it back to the castle!" Exclaimed Pinkie Pie

"Yes, thank you Pinkie. So like you said, let's continue to take it to the castle." Finished Twilight


Dear Princess Celestia

I require your help, as a strange alien creature has tooken residence with Fluttershy for the past week, and no one knows the power this alien could possess other than what Rainbow Dash has told us when Scootaloo told her about it. She says it can shoot magical death beams out of a stick! After dragging this... Thing back to the castle, I gave a good hard look at it and got to see it's features. It is a tall creature clad in a strange grey armor that has random olive green half circles on its chest and face, and these strange pads on it's chest that look to be made out of iron, and is roughly 6' tall if what I saw is correct with a face made of a curved T with a frown seemingly plastered to it's face, and also has two tusks at the bottom of it's head... don't know what to do and I would like your assistance in this. The alien is currently in the castle after Pinkie Pie hit in the back of the head with a frying pan, which rendered it unconscious. There is no telling what this alien could do, but I am planning to question it as soon as it wakes up.

Your student fellow princess, Twilight Sparkle

"Spike! I need you to send this message to Princess Celestia at once!" Said Twilght to a now awake Spike
"Sheesh, ok Twilight. Can't a dragon get a decent rest around here?" Said Spike as he sent the letter to Princess Celestia.

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1st Person Tusk

As I start to Groggily sit up, I start to get a large headache. "Aagh! Why do I always wake up in pain?" I question nobody.

"O-oh! Y-youre awake, that's good." I heard a familiar voice say.

"Fluttershy? Is that you?" I question as I my vision slowly comes back

"O-oh, yeah. Tusk, those ponies that came into the cottage, and sorta, uuuhh, beat you up, were my friends. And they are all really really sorry to what happened after I explained to them. And they all really want to say sorry face to face." Said Fluttershy

"Well, okay I guess, I mean as long as I can get out of this small bed." I Laugh at the irony of this situation. How I keep waking up in small beds, injured.

"O-okay, then, right this way." Fluttershy says as she guides me through the long hallways, seemingly made out of crystal. "O-okay, this is where they are." Said Fluttershy, motioning to an intricate and massive set of doors. So I go over to them, and push them open. And the only thing I see is the same bunch of ponies that tried to somewhat kill me sitting on thrones. "Uuuuh... Hi" I say.

"Aaaaawkward" I hear the pink pony say.

An awkward meeting

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3rd person/pony

"Aaaawkward" Said Pinkie Pie. And like she said it became awkward with a long sullen silence. After about a minute or two, Twilight speaks up. "Sooo... uhh sorry about what we, uhh kinda did a little bit ago." She, which I can tell from her voice, say's. "Speaking of a little bit ago, how long was I out cold?" Tusk asks albeit hesitantly. "You where out for about 30 minutes. Im kinda surprised that you were out for that short of a time actually, considering it was Pinkie Pie who hit you." Twilight answered. "OK?" Tusk answered. "So, Tusk is it? Fluttershy has told me about what you have done, and we are all terribly sorry." Yep! "Mighty sorry" apologized Twilight, Pinkie, and Apple Jack while Rainbow Dash just grumbled in response, still not trusting Tusk.

"I thank you all for saying sorry, But it still is a sign of aggression to the the Republic. But since I am not going back any time soon, I accept your apologies." And With that said a conversation started, and went on till sundown. Although most of the "conversation" was just a bunch of question and answer. Specifically from Twilight asking what I was, What the Republic was, and what technology we had, and some other things similar to that.


1st person Tusk

After we finished our talk I had one thought on my mind. Hoping Flutter Shy will allow me to go back to the Everfree. Why? After all I just got mauled in there by a pack of wolves made of wood. Well the simple answer is that I forgot my blasters in there. And Fluttershy wouldn't allow me to go back in there in case I would get hurt again. But now I had a plan. So while me and Fluttershy were walking back to her cottage in the barren streets I had a question to ask her. "So Fluttershy, do you think that I could go for a walk for a bit. meet you back at the your cottage?" I questioned. "Umm, if you want, I guess. I mean if you promise to be safe."

"Yes Fluttershy, I promise to be safe" I answered.

"Ok, well have fun on your walk." She said in her timid voice while I go on a different route that would hopefully lead out of the town and towards the Everfree.

"Looks like my wish came true." I say to myself as I leave the town and head towards the Everfree. As I get to the Everfree forest and look around I can finally see in detail why Fluttershy is so scared of this place as I take a look at the dark and ominous entrance to the forest. But ignoring the sights, I notice a trail of old and crusted blood leading towards Fluttershy's cottage. I then recall what those three fillies did to get me to Fluttershy's cottage. "Which means that blood is mine" I mutter As I follow the trail into the Everfree. After a brisk couple minutes of walking I come into the clearing where I saved Apple Bloom and company from the pack of timber wolves. I look over to a large pool of blood with my blasters scattered around it. I collect my DC-17 hand blaster pistol and holster it then walk over to my Z-6 rotary blaster cannon mini gun and pick it up with little effort thanks to years of experience. After I cleaned and inspected my blasters, I went for Fluttershy's home. But mid way in between the field from the Everfree and her cottage, I was stopped by three little fillies. "HI TUSK! HOW ARE YOU DOIN!" They yelled at the same time. "Hello you three" I greeted. "How did you get away from my sister? Yeah, how did you even escape Rainbow Dash? Yeah? How did you escape mah sis?" They said. "Well, you see, I was incapacitated, but it all ended up being a big misunderstanding after, I assume, Fluttershy told them what I did to save you three." I responded. "Really? It went down that easy?" Said Scootaloo
"Yes actually. I am just as suprised as you three, but why dont you all go home, its getting dark" "OK!" The three fillies said and sped awa, not showing much care for my safety, Just as if them or their friends ends up in danger more than often, and comes out completely fine. I quickly shrug off that thought as I continue my way towards Fluttershy's home. After another short walk I find my self in front of Fluttershy's cottage. I set my Z-6 near the end of the bridge in front of my hopefully temporary abode, and knock on the door.

1st person Fluttershy

As I am cleaning my dishes, I look outside and notice how low Celestia's Sun is. It's almost dark out! "Oh, I hope that Tusk is alright"I say out loud. But soon I hear three firm knocks. "Eeep! Oh, I do hope that's Tusk." I say with a worried tone as I walk over to the door. I open it to see a large crouched down figure with a familiar "helmet" waiting outside, but I quickly call him in. Once inside I start a conversation like one that a mother would give to a child. "Tusk why are you home so late! I was worried about you!" I exclaimed.

"Well you see Fluttershy, I had to go and get some things" Tusk said as he flashed me the sorta half skirt that he wears, where I could see the handle of something attached to it that wasn't there in the previous week. "Well, I guess that's okay, but you still could have gotten here earlier" I state.

"Yes Fluttershy, I know, but I had to take a... detour to get the items back" Tusk says as he defends himself.

"Well you still could have gotten here earlier, so for that, I am going to make you go to bed earlier as punishment." I state.

"Oh come on Fluttershy, you are not my mothe-" the clones sentence was cut off for the second time of the day by a life threatening tool. Fluttershy's stare cut into the very heart and soul that was Tusk, and told him to never, NEVER dis Fluttershy. Tusk quickly gets into a tight and rigid pose while saluting, and says in a shaky voice "YES MA'AM" and then hurries up stairs into my bed that I insisted he have while he stays here. "Oh dear it sure is late" I say sleepily as I see the moon rising. So I get under the covers and snuggle into the couch cushions as I doze off to sleep.

A Misunderstanding

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Twilight POV
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As I wake up with my mentors sun shining in my eyes, I smile at the day to come. And that smile grew even more when I realized how many questions I had stockpiled up from my previous talk with Tusk. I just had so many more questions! I quickly jumped out of my comfortable bed and went towards my kitchen to make some coffee and write the questions I had down on a piece of paper as to not forget them. As I walked into the kitchen, a smile still plastered onto my face. After I made some coffee and got a piece of paper, I decided to send a letter to Princess Celestia about Tusk. But just as that thought escaped my mind, my smile faltered and fell. 'Oh know. I already sent a letter to the Princess explaining Tusk. And it wasn't referring to Tusk as a very kind pony. Or whatever he is. How did I forget to ask him that?' Oh, what am I going to do?!


The day before
Celestia POV
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As the last noble left the day court, I could only sigh at how ridiculous these requests were getting. I believe that last noble said something about how faulty and fake the new jewelry is. And I guarantee it was just complaining about the "Faulty" and "Fake" jewelry, and not asking for something to be done. But just as that noble left, I got a letter from Twilight.

Dear Princess Celestia

I require your help, as a strange alien creature has tooken residence with Fluttershy for the past week, and no one knows the power this alien could possess other than what Rainbow Dash has told us when Scootaloo told her about it. She says it can shoot magical death beams out of a stick! After dragging this... Thing back to the castle, I gave a good hard look at it and got to see it's features. It is a tall creature clad in a strange grey armor that has random olive green half circles on its chest and face, and these strange pads on it's chest that look to be made out of iron, and is roughly 6' tall if what I saw is correct with a face made of a curved T with a frown seemingly plastered to it's face, and also has two tusks at the bottom of it's head... I don't know what to do and I would like your assistance in this. The alien is currently in the castle after Pinkie Pie hit in the back of the head with a frying pan, which rendered it unconscious. There is no telling what this alien could do, but I am planning to question it as soon as it wakes up.

Your student fellow princess, Twilight Sparkle

WHAT! I cant believe what I am reading. A strange alien creature? That can shoot magic from a stick? This has to be a joke, but I know Twilight would never joke at a matter like this. I need to go to Ponyvill immediately! As Celestia quickly gets out of her seat and goes to Luna's room, while scanning her memory to see if she has faced or even heard of what Twilight has described in her letter.

Luna POV
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I was just getting up when I suddenly heard the clip-clop of hooves coming towards my door. As quickly as possible, I put on my royal regalia and walked towards the door. About half way towards the gilded floor, the door opened to reveal my sister. "Hello dear sister, what are you doing here?" I questioned.
"There seems to be an emergency at Ponyville that require's our immediate attention. Twilight Sparkle sends a message of distress about some alien she describes." After she said this, I quickly asked for the note and read it over, and was surprised by what I read.
"Are you sure Celestia? If what dear Sparkle describes, we need to depart for Ponyville immediately. If some "alien" is able to walk freely, there is no telling the consequences". I say to not only state it, but assure myself the truth, for dear Sparkle would never lie at a matter such as this.

"Yes sister, I have already called for a squad of our finest soldiers to depart at dawn tomorrow." Celestia stated. "And we must not wait any longer sister, for Twilight and her friends could be in trouble." Though I believe my sister's last statement, I can not help but worry for Twilight and the other Elements of Harmony.

Stark Shield POV
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As the sergeant of this squad, I have a duty to protect the Princesses and this country from harm, and also a much harder task of keeping my squad in order. Typical to give me the newest recruits. I have been in this military for thirteen years, and performed exemplary if I might add and the past two squads I have commanded have all been recruits. Not a typical recruit you would find on duty, no. You would see me with young sprite, and extremely annoying recruits fresh from the academy. I had tooken control of this squad a week ago, and already I wish I could jump off this mountain. But my rant of these incompetent fools was halted when the door opened to reveal our beloved Princess. We all quickly bowed, and I questioned why she had here. "Princess, I hope you do not mind me asking, but why are you are?" I inquired.
"You all are probably wondering why I am here, and the answer to that is because I have need of your services Sergeant."
"But Princess, no offense of course, but why would you want us?" I asked
"You see Sergeant, a threat has risen in Ponyville, and me and my sister require some assistance, and I need you to prep yourselves and ready by early tomorrow morning." She informed us.
"But why us? I mean, I understand why you would want me of course, but the others? They just got out of the academy a week ago!" I exclaimed, not to keep them safe, but to question just... why? 'The are all imcompetant fools who should not even have the title of a security guard!' "The reason why I have chosen you and your new squad is because there performence was beyond and above the standards set. And I want to see this first hand, for I have high expectations for you and your squad. Are you saying you do not think your squad is capable, Sergeant?" She seemed to peel the pride off of me like a bandaid.
"N-no, of course not Princess. We will be ready by morning to deal with this threat with you and Princess Luna" I said.
"Good, make sure that you are" She said while simultaneously closing the door. We all stared at the door in silence until I decided to beak it. "ALRIGHT MEN! YOU HEARD THE PRINCESS, GET READY!" I shouted the command to my squad, and then added "That mean's you too Comet" which was quickly followed by a disappointed 'Ohhhh...' I then realized something. The Princess didn't exactly tell us what we were dealing with. No matter, for I am sure my great and extensive military career and training will be more than enough!

Meanwhile in Ponyville-

A certain clone had a very bad feeling about tomorrow morning...

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Princess' POV
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"Sister! Art thou ready to depart and deal with this threat? We must leave at once to catch it by surprise."

"Yes Luna I am ready, quickly we must gather Stark Shield and the others. I have taken the liberty to send a letter to Princess Twilight to inform her to be ready. Now let us depart." Said Celestia as she exited her chambers and started to walk down the regal hallway with her sister close behind. As they walk down the hallway, the early morning sun beaming through the windows that look down on on the city of Canterlot, the two sisters are thinking of ways to defeat this "alien".
"Sister, from what young Twilight has described in her letter, how would we we defeat this beast? It is described to shout lasers out of a stick, and a large one at that. She also says that this creature is nearly our height, and the lack of mobility it must have from carrying that large stick around would help us in a fight against it sister, would it not?"

"I would think so Luna, but we can not be certain for we do not know it's capabilities. When we confront it, we must be very cautious." Responded Celestia as she and Luna left the castle towards the guard's barracks.

Stark Shield POV
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"ALRIGHT YOU LAZY TOOLS! GET UP AND READY, WE MUST LEAVE HERE IMMEDIATELY!" I shouted over the bustle of the morons in front of me trying to get out of bed and put on their gear, unlike me because I have already put on my armor and done my morning training as any good soldier would, which is why I am currently trying to wake up my company before the princesses arrive. Knock knock "Stark Shield, I trust that you are ready and able to go to Ponyville?" Questioned Princess Celestia

"Of course I am ready your royal highnesses, unlike the rest of my company" I say shooting a glare at the bumbling idiots behind me."Then we shall be off as soon as the others are ready." Said Princess Luna. I bow and turn around around to the privates desperately putting on and tightening pieces of armor. I look at Sparkling Comet, or as the others call him, Comet. He is the most tolerable out of them, as he actually listens to orders when they are given out. He is a grey Unicorn with a purple mane with a blue hue. Next is Steel breeze, a Pegasus Stallion that has a very light blue coat with a white mane. Then there is Nimble Armor, the absolute laziest out of all of them. He is a brown pegasus with a dark blue mane and the least competent out of all of them. And there is also Fleet Hoof, a tan Earth Pony with a black mane. He is the strongest out of them, though not nearly as strong as me. they all lack necessary traits to be in the Royal guard, except for one, which is their fighting skill. They are all amazing in a fight, not nearly my level which has taken years to get to, but they are still good.

"Art thou ready to depart sergeant?" Questioned Luna.

"Of course you majesty" I say and bow at the same time. "Aren't we?" I say to my squad who give a quick salute. "Then we shall be off" And with those words, the Princesses charge and release a long range teleportation spell in to Ponyville square.

Twilight Sparkle POV
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After I realized my mistake, I went over to wake Spike up as fast as possible. While I was running I didn't notice Spike coming and ran into him, and onto the hard crystalline floor."OH Spike! are ok?"

"Yeah Twilight, i'm fine. But I got this letter from the Princess, it's probably a response about Tusk" He informs me to which I give a quick ok and snatch the letter from his grasp to read it over.

Dear Princess Twilight Sparkle
I have received your letter about this creature, and Luna and I are worried for and the elements safety, as well as every pony else's. We are coming to Ponyville with a guard force to try and negotiate with this creature. If we fail to do this, our actions may take a turn for the worse and become violent. We do this for you, and every pony's safety in Ponyville. We are are teleporting into Ponyville soon, see you then
With luck to you and myself, Princess Celestia

'This is bad, this is really bad!' I keep thinking to myself. "Spike come on! we need to go warn Flutter Shy and Tusk!" I say as I quickly levitate Spike onto my back and rush out of the castle. I am immediately greeted by the morning sun, but I ignore it and head towards Flutter Shy's cottage. As soon as I get to her house I immediately give three hard knocks

3rd Pony POV
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*KNOCK* *KNOCK* "OH! is someone at the door? who would be here this early?" FlutterShy says as she gets up off the couch and heads towards her door. As she opens it, she is quickly greeted by Twilight. "FlutterShy!"
"Yes Twilight?"
"We have a problem. I sent a letter to Princess Celestia explaining Tusk when I first saw him, after we dragged him up to my castle. And I explained him being a threat, so now Princess Celestia is coming here with a guard force to try and deal with Tusk!" Explained Twilight.
"Oh no! I need to go and wake up Tusk!" FlutterShy exclaims as she quickly trots up the stairs into her bedroom. She opened to reveal Tusk still sleeping form."Hey Tusk, would you please wake up? It's ok if you don't want to" After those words left her mouth, he quickly stiffened and shot up as if ready for battle. "Who's the- oh, its you FlutterShy. Hehe sorry. Why did you wake me up?"
"Oh, um Twilight is here and she made a tiny mistake. she sent a letter to Princess Celestia explaining how you could be a threat when she first met you, and now she is coming with a guard force to get you" Flutter Shy explained to Tusk. "Ok... this is unexpected, when will they arrive?"
"Soon" Tusk responded by getting out of the bed, grabbing his DC-17 blaster pistol, and clicked a button on it. He went down stairs to greet Twilight. "Hey Tusk. So about that letter"
"I know Twilight, FlutterShy explained it to me. And if she is right then we should probably go and try to explain to them. And by we, I mean you, cause they seem out for me" Said Tusk
"That seems about right, lets go" Said Twilight as they left the building.


In Ponyville square, or the market place, things were going well for the shop owners readying their stalls for the day to come, until
*Flash, Pop*
After that occurrence stood Princess Celestia and Luna with a squad of guards in front of them. "alright soldiers, we shall move out and cover as much ground as possible to deal with this threat!" Ordered Luna which followed by a chorus of salutes and 'yes your majesty. "But remember, if we find it, we must try and talk. We do not want violence to be our goal." Said Celestia which was once again followed by a chorus of 'yes your majesty!'. They started to walk towards Twilights castle, but half way through the market place Twilight Sparkle, FlutterShy and the Alien creature came down the road leading to the market place, which was greeted by surprise from the guards and the Princess', and the citizens around. Twilight walked forward explaining the situation "Princess, please allow me to explain, Tusk-"
"Who is this 'Tusk' Twilight? Is he the creature" Asked Luna, to which Tusk move his hand a little closer to his pistol. "Yes Princess, he - Twilight was cut off a second time from the guard at front, or more famously known as Stark Shield "Watch out Princess! The creature is threatening us, he is going for the handle on his skirt! I shall defend you! CHARGE!" Shouted Stark Shield as he ran towards the clone spear raised high, to which the clone responded by pul;ling out his DC-17 Hand Pistol, putting it into stun mode and shooting the charging Stallion. As he fell to the ground, Princess Luna decided to take action "THE FEIND! It has killed fair Stark Shield! I shall take care of this sister!" She exclaimed as she charged up a spell and fired at Tusk. He tried to dodge but he wasn't fast enough as the magical hit him and propelled him several feet back, his helmet rolling away.

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The reason for canceling my on and most likely only story is because I cannot think of anything to write, and when I try it I never have good motivation, which led to huge gaps between chapters, and for that I am sorry. When I did write I enjoyed it, and enjoyed seeing that people would actually go out of their way to read a story that I wrote. The feedback and people in general who read this mean a lot to me, so I thank everyone who actually read this story, and I thank the people who enjoyed it even more! I will likely not attempt to write again, so thank you for the support that I got for this story.