Hello to everyone who is reading or has read my story's first chapter. I'm writing this note to clear up a few confusions and issues readers seem to be having. First things first, my OC pony Spurspark has a purple coat and a white mane and tail, my mane is abit shaggy and comes down abit past my ears and to about the top of my eyes. My tail as I mentioned in the story is a white tuft due to my blowing it up with magic. Secondly my magic, Spurspark's magic pertains more to explosions and breaking than anything else that's how he was able to break the rocks and then break them further to give them a proper record shape. This is because I personally see unicorns as having a personal magic and a general magic, the general magic being the levitation and control over objects that we so often see in the show. His personal magic is as i said before based around explosions, think of the explosions as when a firework explodes. Yah it's like that. Finally his cutie mark is exactly that, a classic looking red firework with an explosion in the background.
The second order of business is a few things I've placed in the story that have brought confusion. I'll start with that part where Spurspark mentioned a war. I will be explaining that further into the story, i intend to give the war explanation a full chapter of its own. Next, the little tidbits such as spaced periods and the brackets and such, firstly my friend has a successful fimfic on the site and i got him to proofread for me, and he is the one who added in the spaced periods and such, and those wont be returning in later chapters. The brackets though are my idea, and it's just how I've decided to write, if they really bother the readers that much then i will stop using them but for the time being i will keep them around to add in silly little additions and second thoughts on things.
One more thing that i guess i should maybe clear up is the second oc I've added in, DJ-3JU his name is pronounced exactly how it is spelled. D, J, E, J, U although i made the E a 3 to reference DJ-PON3. Regarding 3JU's cutie mark, a Dal sengo is a very obscure mark used in music notation, it looks like this
I hope any who read my story will give a chance to spread out a bit more, and I'm going to try my best to make it more enjoyable for the readers.
Thank you for bearing with me through my first writing attempt, and thank you for any constructive criticism you may be willing to give during the reading.