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You will do anything
If I numb away all your pain
The poppy field and the Golden Gate
The dragon's fire
A fall from grace
Artist
Yeah, I've been lost in the world
How do we all make it through?
Caught in thought, daydreaming like I do
Dear Sky Wishes,
Thank you for granting my wish on 1st May!
My new wish is a big one, so I understand if you can't grant it, but I hope that you can.
I would like to not be such a lazy bones.
Please, please, please let it come true.
Yours,
-abrony
Let’s not be for want
Wanting is a sin
I don’t want anything at all
Yellow fever folded off
Let’s drink ’til it’s Pentecost
Drink unto the wind
Jump in, my red little fox
Artist
Yup it's a cheeky one of these for my pony friend Peace Petal
The stand out this week. It was difficult to put down! Found it from a recommendation by PaulAsaran.
Overall. IVYSAUR, I CHOOSE YOU!
Best lines:
You can stop pretending to care, you know
I wish that I could hate her.
20:44
My interest has been peaked
20:44
*piqued.
21:15
I’ll have you know I made a very pretty pony
21:16
*That* I have no trouble believing.
Overall. Sunset's message history.
Best lines:
I feel bad, like I’m asking for too much, but she’s my girlfriend. Shouldn’t my feelings matter?
Some useful advice I found here! https://lyssemediting.com/how-to-write-interrupted-dialogue/
I ticked the parts I think I understand currently, and crossed the bits I have been getting wrong.
Hyphens ✔
A hyphen is only used in interrupted dialogue if the character is stuttering.
Em dashes can work for stuttering as well, but they signify a longer pause/slower stutter than the hyphen, and I typically don’t recommend them.
In which instead of doing useful things, I take a quick look at today's ratio'd fics and speculate why they are getting the red thumbs of doom.
Because people t-down 'M' fics for some reason, despite there being a filter, these are likely to be mostly NSFW, and ofc today's is no different.
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