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n1god


Swors is my way.

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Wow, this is fucking hot. Silly cute indulgent fun with a nice cast of OCs, lots and lots of lathered on, semi-incestous boy bullying, tempting horny promises of things to come, petty competitive primal instinctual motivations...

You're doing a really compelling job with this, and the kinks are hitting all the notes they should — or at least, for the reasons that I end up liking them. Hopeful for more!

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Thank you, it took a while to edit the chapter but I'm glad you liked it, the story came out of nowhere and although it took a while to make the cover, it's great, nothing more than to give the viewer the faces of the most used characters or those who They will have an important role.

Good so far! But man, Moonlight dumping Midnight for his sister due to size-difference is pretty harsh, not to mention doing it in his bed and Lightning practically rubbing it in his face! I wonder if the green nurse is Tagiosa? Hopefully we'll see Fiery Kickstart down the line!

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More like they drifted apart due to that incident. But yeah Lightning definitely stole Moonlight. Being a futa makes her a lot more cocky here.

Hmm, Fiery Kickstarter is one of those OCs that probably won't appear due to the fact that it's hard to fit him into this type of story. But I'm sure later down the line I can figure it out.

Tagiosa will appear in a few chapters.

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Nice to hear! How do futas work in this world, just born that way? Or did something magic related change Equestria?

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Unless I decide to make a "Teacher teaching Class" moment similar to that of NNN, for now they're just born that way. Though me and n1god are already considering their origin / how they came to be in the first place.

Interesting to see new OCs, who created them?

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In a way me and n1god both created them. We needed a mare that Midnight would be able to bang on the beach, and thus we came up with Tropical Desert, a pegasus mare on the beach with a big ass XD

Pounding Waves also has that same origin, but originally, she was just an unnamed mare that we later gave a name in what probably will be Chapter 4 now. However, I decided to introduce her earlier as Tropical's friend (probably best friend), so that the readers can get to know her better.

The Captain will remain as just the Captain, we didn't give him, the other stallion, and the other two mares names. Though perhaps the Captain will receive a name in the future, either next chapter or during volleyball tournament between colleges, should Midnight decide to join the volleyball team this year.

Originally all of them were meant to be side characters, with Tropical just only appearing for this beach arc, but I kind of want them to reappear in some capacity in the future. We'll see how things develop.

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Ah, nice! Also second chapter came sooner than expected!

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Yep. It helps that all I need to do is edit (which I do after me and n1god do a large section together), but I still sometimes add a ton more than planned.

For example the morning scene I added on to expand on Thunder, Snowy, Lightning, and Midnight as a family. Thunder being worried about costs I also added. I expanded the volleyball game and me and n1god decided that to add the scene where Midnight is unable to resist the temptation to play with Tropical while surfing lol.

Next chapter, depending on how long will it be, will probably gain three expanded scenes and two new scenes.

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