It's Twilight's fifteenth birthday, and her parents have taken her out to dinner at her favorite Mexicolt restaurant. Princess Celestia is even here to celebrate with her! It would be perfect, except for one thing: she has the hiccups. Can she overcome them before Celestia loses her patience and exiles her from Equestria forever? Probably.
Very lovely read! I can see it in MLP book with children tales, for example. Innocent and sweet
Good ol' slice of filly life! Have an upvote (and one of those fancy Mexicolt cookies).
That was a good story.
It feels like there aren't enough stories that put some focus on Twilight's life pre-pilot. This was a nice little glimpse of it.
Ohoho~ TwiLuna you say? You've got my attention now
Your description says it's her 15th. birthday but the story starts out with it being her 17th. birthday.
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thank you all!
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this was originally going to be the start of a set of vignettes i was gonna call 'mandelbrot' about the friendship between twilight and celestia and how, though it may move in the same patterns, deep subtleties are grooved in their place... i want to explore the layers of understanding that build up in their relationship over the years, sometime
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thanks for the catch! fixed
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That sounds amazing, I'd totally read it
Good bet that vase was one of Luna's. Only thing I can think of.