Spike didn't ask to be saved, not like this.
Written as an entry for the Cyberpunk Equestria Contest.
Cover Art provided by the wonderful kleia.
06/01/23 - 06/02/23: Featured.
Don't mind me, just a dreamer.
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That was amazing!
Красота в классике
11598516
I'm happy you feel that way.
This was way more hopeful than I expected going in. Good vibes. Great job!
11599063
Thank you.
That actually reminded me of a game 'Project Eden'. One of a characters there, Ember, is a full-body cyborg. She suffered injuries incompatible with life in a skytrain crash and was put into a robotic body to keep her alive. Later she began to display the symptoms of... I think it was called cybenetic withdrawal syndrome, main sing of which is the cyborg becoming more shust-in, less sociable, and overall prefering solitude. Ember's CWS was driven further since she was a shut-in even before the accident.
Well this was... depressing. Well done, word-smith.
11599205
Thanks for the praise, I hope you enjoyed the story.
good story!
11599229
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
OK, I really like the world you built here and the ending wasn't what I expected, but in a good way. I hope you'll continue with this. Would be interesting to see how the other characters interact in this advanced world you created.
11599404
Unfortunately, this was only written as a one-shot, and I never had any plans to continue it. However, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it so much.
This was a beautiful story, very well executed on the concept and very emotional too. Well done, and good luck in the contest!
11599815
Thanks for the kind words and encouragement, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed what I wrote.
The idea of Spike having an existential crisis over his body is ripe with possibility. While I think you did a serviceable job, theres far more to mine here. Similarly we know little of this world, or its Mane 6. How do they feel? Are they happy/sad? Aside from that all I can really suggest is perhaps speed up the pacing a bit, your describing a lot of things which can be glossed over easily enough.
11618638
Okay, thanks for the feedback.
wow, this was really good.
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