This story is a sequel to Daring Do and the Mystery of Eternal Ruins
The fate of Equestria depends once again on the mane 6. Twilight is caught up in an abrupt new adventure, which will lead her to solve chaotic situations with her friends and unexpected allies.
📘Chapter index and release schedule
🛑 Warning: this fanfic comes from a Spanish version, translation errors may be found, your understanding is expected.
✨ [Midjourney] [Ratings Disabled] [Danu] [Order Knights] [Cunabula] [Season 10] [Comic]
What has Sunset, planet Earth and Humanity got to do with anything!?
Or specifically with the Knights of "Order" from Season 10?
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In the previous story of Daring Do I left some clues, but let's go slow.
Pretty sure Balor's a guy but eh. Just taking a look because this is intriguing. You have my interest
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detail: the original knights were 3 princesses and 3 princes, the current ones respect that order. Or I try hard to be so.
Balor (female) -> Race: Draco Dragon
Ceridwen (female) -> Race: Quetzalkan
Morrigan (female) -> Race: Urutaú
Danu (male) -> Race: Leopony
Mannah (man) -> Race: Butshin / akhtubut qirshin (from Arabic shark - octopus)
Taranis (male) -> Race: Ophiotaur
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Balor really was male in the wiki. But whatever, this do seems to be a slightly alternate world than canon.
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Slightly alternate world than canon? Wonderful, if one read the MLP comics as if they were fanfics, I'm sure you would have a similar opinion. This is the best comment I've had so far.
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Both the comics and the show itself has some conflicting inaccurates with each other in the first place.
Daring Do's a she. Actually, reading the rest you got a lot of pronouns and relationships mixed up. Pinkie is pretty much the closest friend to the mane 6 so 'their' should be used.
Otherwise, I think I get the gist of what's going on.
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I'm sorry, it's the best translation I can do. On the other hand, I think that the relationships are not so bad, I reserved the participation of several characters to accommodate almost everyone.
In the previous chapter, Pinkie Pie had a bigger spotlight. In this chapter, Applejack - Rainbow Dash - Rarity stand out more.
Fluttershy is almost absent. But that's because it will be more important later...
Anyway thanks for the critique.
This story is getting interesting
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I will be making several posts during the month.
The correction is redundant if she's saying it right anyway.
But anyway....
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Thanks for the observation, grammar checker shenanigans!
Greetings readers! What was promised is fulfilled, this 08/04/2024 this fanfic closes, do not open any more filler chapters. There will be a text update next 10/22/2024 but it will only be minor issues such as corrected dialogues (one more or less) and spelling signs. However, everything will remain as this. Once that date has passed, the only thing left to do is enjoy the memory of this fanfic that has taken me so long to finish.