Queen Chrysalis gets freed from her marble prison only to get greeted by Princess Cadence, who hopes to redeem her.
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The concept is very very good. But ifeel things move way to fast m8.
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Indeed. It doesn’t even explain exactly what was going on with Chrysalis and Celestia. It was just completely out of nowhere.
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its explained more well in the prequel stories
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What prequel stories?
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I THOUGHT THIS WAS A COMMENT ON ANOTHER STORY I WROTE SORRY!!! thanks for ur criticism but it was meant to be a reference to the comics where celestia caused the holes in chrysalis!!!
I liked them, but I’d suggest rewriting by expanding the story since it does seem rushed.
I don't really understand why they suddenly become girlfriends, and shining armor became ex husband.
Ok. Good
This story should renamed to "the cuckholded of shining"