Rainy days are no fun for Starlight Glimmer, but maybe Sunburst can help her chase the clouds away.
Written for the A Thousand Words Contest in the Fluff category. Special thanks to Pen and Paper for prereading and their valuable input!
Sorry for being a Starlight Glimmer apologist
Rainy days are no fun for Starlight Glimmer, but maybe Sunburst can help her chase the clouds away.
Written for the A Thousand Words Contest in the Fluff category. Special thanks to Pen and Paper for prereading and their valuable input!
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Cute and heartwarming.
"You could read a book!" said Twilight's voice in her head.
"Nope. Nothing."
"I left you a castle full of the things."
"Nothing at all to occupy my time."
"Don't make me teleport over from Canterlot and smack you with a novel you'll love."
"You're awfully pushy for my conscience."
"I'm not your conscience. I'm just your mental model of Twilight. And she'd be really insulted by your insinuations right now."
"A-hem."
"Oh, come on, I barely ever met Cadence."
"And yet here I am."
"You're reading too much into this."
"Even Twilight isn't this oblivious."
"She's right. I'm not."
"Well, I have something to do today after all! See a therapist."
"About time."
"Shut up, internal Twilight."
There we go. Cute stuff, but a little by the numbers in terms of the "suddenly seeing a friend in a romantic context" revelation. Still an enjoyable bit of fluff, and clearly engaging enough for me to make some micro-scenes out of it. Thank you for it and best of luck in the judging.
This is a sweet and cute relationship and story. Sadly, I dumped the ship when NeighShadow became my OTP :/
aww, not even her kite! that is the worst possible thing
and oof, getting flashbacks to how i felt in my first relationship! that mix of wanting to be seen and not wanting to be seen too closely, that insecurity, augh
oof, really sells how dissatisfied Starlight is in her current life! and yeah, the life she ends up with in the canon is a lot less interesting than the one of the cult leader with a chip on her withers
aww, Sunburst is down bad... and understandably so!
aww, that is nice!
aww, love this description of a first kiss! so very vivid and warm
very cute and heartwarming, just like the story overall! as soft and fluffy as i imagine a Starburst:tm: candy to be. good work!