Jacob Irving is not your average human. He's not popular, impoverished, and devoid of purpose. Seeking an escape from his life, he stumbles upon a hole that unexpectedly transports him to Equestria. Since he no longer calls himself Jacob Irving, he calls himself by a name he used to go by.
Featured on 08/22/2023 (LET'S GO!!)
Featured on 12/25/2023 (GREAT CHRISTMAS PRESENT!!)
Before I read this, I must know: Why would Jacob want to call himself Anonymous?
Good story can't wait to see the next chapter
Hmm...this has a good start, and its rare to see a fellow HIE writer with a good opening.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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It takes place during the season after the MLP movie.
Creí que el peluche iba a obtener vida de alguna manera y convertirse un un personaje.
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No, pero ese es un pensamiento interesante. Espero que hayas disfrutado de la historia.
Good Chatter one I give it a 10 out 88 .
Ps I'm going to help you make more fanfic ideas
Excellent Chatter 2 I give it a 10 out of 99
On the contrary, I think you just described the average amarican
He's not accepting friendship! Someone call the friendship police!
Un buen comienzo y una historia muy interesante es bueno saber que se utilizaron algunos diálogos en español
no puedo esperar a el siguiente capitulo y espero que sea pronto que ya me dejo muy interesado en que pasara luego
gracias por compartir el comienzo de esta historia
( A good start and a very interesting story it is good to know that some dialogues were used in Spanish
I can not wait for the next chapter and I hope it is soon that I am very interested in what will happen next
thanks for sharing the beginning of this story )
Do you mean the Mass movie from this year or the state of Massachusetts?.
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Mass is a Catholic church service. Probably should have specified that.
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Oh yeah!, now i remember!.
I just finished reading the poem: Before You Were Mine by Carol Ann Duffy.
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i think he meant like.. a church mass.
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I just realized.
That should be a deer instead of dear
Great chapter, man! And diamond tiara is gonna get it!
Oh boy...
Excellent new Chatter I give this story a 10 out of 10
Welp, not who I expected to be on the verge of death, but it works.
And holy hell that was a fight from left field. Though the elements are going to be ticked when they find out who the griffons were harassing.
GTFO dodge boiii
Thanks IWA for another great chapter. I wish you the best of luck with your next one, and as always have fun writing.
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You are welcome. The next chapter is well underway.
Great chapter, though I feel like our bud Anon may be crusing for a bruising with that handyman job.
Pinke should be Pinkie
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Agreed
Thanks again IWA for another amazing chapter. I'm really loving the slow burn romance between Anon and Tia thus far, and think you doing a great job slowly building up Anon's character with a little background info being released every chapter. I'm excited to see what happens next in Canterlot. Thanks again, good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
This is a pretty good story so far and I do hope to see more soon!
For someone who claims to know humans she spends most of her time with a bunch of high school girls who decided to be nice to the new kid. Most of the stuff sunset writes about to her is the stuff that happening in her life which is not exactly a large sample of humans.
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That was the point I was trying to get across. She thinks she knows a lot about humans but she, as you said, only encountered students who chose to be nice to her. She hasn't encountered the emotionally hurt and suffering crowd.
Well, theres some equestrian racism for ya.
Should that be "Stop shaking my leg?"
Give him a month in canterlot with celestia, tops
Interesting to see he still has some drawbacks from the bar fight. Then again, things like that tend to leave an imprint on people involved. Great chapter, man!
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Fixed the error. Thanks for pointing that out.
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No prob! And congrats on the 70 likes!
dam this is pretty good so far keep it up bud
Keep up the good work
The ship has set sail!!!
So far so good, I'm really enjoying reading this. Can't wait to see what happens next. My mind keeps going to what will happen if he ever meets Blueballs
There is noone around Jacob... No need to spam his name...
Drink something alcoholic when ever you read 'Jacob'.
You die of alcohol poisening by the end of the chapter...
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I do apologize for that. First chapter mistakes. I appreciate the criticism. Thank you.
Rocky start... Running smoother. Well done!
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Again, I thank you for your constructive criticism.
Most excellent chapter and overall character development
Celestia and Anon... Nice
CMC suicide squad... Seriously if DT isn't around to watch they could just say they did it... Foal logic
I wonder what Anon has to offer ones his hard shell is broken...
You spam Name of the MC again if its unnessecary...
Sooo... perhaps as least switch is up... Anon,the human, the Ape of green, the grumpy homosapient etc etc etc...
Celestia didn't have by any chance the name Solar Lance?
Epic fight Griffons about to get there ass kicked in by Celestia. Two words: 'Roasted Catbird's'!
Moon
Celestia... That clever Mare got her Stallion closer... Perhaps she can capture his heart for herself...
Captain
Nice 👏 Anon got her good...
Ouch Celestia might walk on Eggshells until she feel save confessing her feelings...
Aaaawww damn it. Playing the waiting game once more... Great read, looking forward to the next chapter update
Thanks again IWA for another amazing chapter. I didn't expect to see the surprise appearance of Tempest in this chapter but her arrival and dialog with Anon was a pleasure to read about. Overall great dialog and plot progression this chapter and I'm excited to see how Anon's and Celestia's relationship develops in his story. Good luck with your next chapter and as always have fun writing. CHEERS!