Celestia and Luna stepped down as rulers of Equestria scant a few years ago. Out and enjoying the world, Celestia takes Luna on a trip to beyond the Frozen North. There they stumble across an ancient secret, long buried and forgotten.
Originally going to be a one shot, I figured I'd split it up and release it as a few chapters. The Teen rating and the tags for Violence and Tragedy are for events in the past that will come up as the sisters discover more.
Feel free to critique and comment on any mistakes I might've made.
A good start for sure. Needs a little editing in the format and grammer but a very good start. It has my attention
Thing are progressing a little fast, but it's not a bad start. Not much else to say since it's so early, but I'll keep my eye on it.
I am interested to see where this goes. Keep writing!