Marble loves her family.
She helps them, cares for them, and would never, ever treat them poorly.
She can't really say the same for herself.
Edited by Pascoite and Present Perfect.
Original art by Kaylemi.
Related blog. Please read.
Walk, don't run. Unless you're late for the bus.
Marble loves her family.
She helps them, cares for them, and would never, ever treat them poorly.
She can't really say the same for herself.
Edited by Pascoite and Present Perfect.
Original art by Kaylemi.
Related blog. Please read.
Page generated in 0.152 seconds
Total duration
871 users online
1,125,227 hits today, 2,107,360 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Damn, that's a rough read.
Not sure what to really say, it's one of those stories that leaves me wondering what I should say, or comment in regards to the content. Honestly? I don't know. I feel a lot of stuff about the situation, but none I can express in this comment.
It's a nicely written story, I'll give you that. Though if you're looking for something more, I'm afraid I can't give it, cause I wouldn't know what to even say.
Good show, Freglz.
I... I don't really have words for this. It was well written; that's a fact. It's just... this is a very charged story that I think can resonate with a lot of people. It resinated with me at least.
Interesting. Not sure where the twist goes. Good internal psychology.
I do quite like this, Marble very nearly being a mirror of how I feel. Were it not for the empathy I hold towards those close to me, I believe by now I would have very much done something rash.
YOU can DO it.
Good luck, again.
Well.
I don't know what to say.
This has so much of my life in here, it's amazing. I wish I could say that I wish I can smile and mean it, but I never do.
At first I hated this because of how emo it was, but I started to like it towards the end.
Paced greatly, language kept under control, bitter feelings poignant. A very good read.
yes. fucking yes.
I honestly would like to see a part two of this. Where she turns the self hatred outward. Uses the rage she feels to do something she knows she shouldn't. Those with self destructive behavior will often be the first to jump into a fight with no plan. That seems like what Marble would do.
Hello there! We have completed a review of this story over on My Little Reviews & Feedback.
I have recorded reading this for the audiobook version to come soon.
Should I link your blog in the description?
11730177
Thank you for asking, but please don't.