This is a biography on my OC, Celestial Charm, and different event in her life as a soldier for the Solar Empire. It will focus on these main components, early life, a new world, battle of Canterlot, and after the war. This will be a rather short story as it is my first ever time actually being on FIM Fiction. I would like to thank Equestria at War’s creators, a Hearts of Iron 4 mod, because the mod gave me the inspiration to create this profile, OC, and story(s)
For such a quick and short little bio, I really liked how you presented your characters and the overall story that you have for them. You have some good ideas here and I would love to see you take one of these small chapters and expand it into a story of its own.
Good job and thanks for writing!
Also, welcome to FimFiction!
Thanks for the feedback, will use that idea
This was neat! I would love to see a fleshed-out version of this story--it's a very solid bio!
(Poor Luna though,...........)
Yea, I don’t really know why I made them shoot Luna. I guess that’s part of my dark side
Not bad, thumbs up.
Cover art is a recolor of an Equestria at war portrait
I really just did not care about logic when it came to dates, did I?