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When the plague began, life had fallen for the Grimes family, first Lori then Judith. But when in a new world, will Rick and Carl move on from their pasts?

The walking dead and MLP belong to their rightful owners

Ps yes it's the comic version of TWD

Plus possible harem for both Rick and Carl

Ps I just edited a picture for the cover, they both belong to their rightful owners

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 16 )

"Oh my..his body appears to be more healthy then i believed"

"He must've been exercising alot from where he came from" Luna said

"You don't know the half of it" and he left and was seen in the hallway and as he walked began to think

YEAH!!!!! YOU TWO have NNNNOOOOOO F******* Idea WHAT HE AND HIS DAD HAVE BEEN THROUGH!!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

"Listen runt, I don't know who you are, but just know just cause your new doesn't mean i'll pull any blows, your on MY TURF.

"BECAUSE YOU STARTED IT YOU MORON! AND FOR WHAT?" Carl notified in response

YEAH, I MEAN WHAT THE F*** IS RAINBOW'S PROBLEM!!!!!! So WHAT, He is good in Music, and has a nice body. And YOU THINK THAT'S A EXCUSE TO BULLY HIM. I really want the Governor and Negan Themselves from the Walking Dead Comics and TV series, to TORTURE AND KILL HER SENSELESS FOR THIS!!!!!! :flutterrage: :pinkiecrazy:

"You heard me, as I heard and saw the whole thing escalate because of you and your pride, you have to pay the price."

HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET, RAINBOW RETARD!!!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"I've called both your parents and your lucky your father understood Carl, he decided to give you a lenient punishment, so you'll have detention for 3 days, as for you Ms. Dash, your SUSPENDED for a week."

Rainbow Dash wanted to argue, but couldn't bring herself too and angrily walked out, giving an angry look at Carl before leaving and Rick had arrived and gave a disappointed look at Carl before the teachers told him what really happened. Rick grounded him for 3 weeks and Carl decided to accept the punishment nonetheless as they went back home.

UM WHAT??!! I'M SORRY Author, but I DON'T LIKE THIS PART. Because, A. RAINBOW F***** STARTED IT. AND B. Carol WAS defending himself! AND C. I HATE ON HOW Rick did to his Son like that. Rick SHOULD KNOW that HE AND HIS SON HAVE DONE WWWWWAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY F******* WORSE STUFF, back in their Zombie infested World!!!!!!!! So Rick should have FRICKIN give some slack to his son.

Carl got up groaning and went to the room and sat in a chair near the table as Rick was cooking some pancakes. After they finished, Rick dropped off Carl and left to do his job, Carl was hesitant to attend because of yesterday still as he avoided the girls and Rainbow, despite them actually not knowing, as he gulped and eventually went inside, a few students gave looks of shock and horror at him as some even said

"Isn't that the kid that attacked one of the Rainbooms?" One student said

"Man, she must have really ticked him off." another student claimed

"I heard she attacked him and he roundhouse kicked her" a third student claimed

Yeah, that's right!!!!! That STUPID BITCH DESERVE IT!!!!!! And you'll should give Carl and his Dad A lot more Respect, since they face the Zombie Apocalypse, and Human Baddies and Psychopaths!!!!! 😎😎😎

Carl was beginning to feel more uncomfortable as he walked to his class and the moment had sent inside, most of students gave him looks of fear or disbelief as had sent to his seat, this time in the far back away from Sunset as she looked at him with confusion. Cheerilee came inside and began to teach the class and each student was to write a thinking piece on a book they read together. After a few hours, it was lunch and Carl had went to the cafeteria and saw Rainbow Dash and the girls at their table quickly ran to Flash and his friends as he said in fear.

"Flash, can you hide me?!" Carl asked

"Whoa, what's the rush?" Flash asked

"No time, just help hide me!"

"Ok, just crawl under the table and I'll try and help."

Carl agreed and hid under the table as quickly as possible as he heard Sunset come and say to Flash

Carl struggled to keep quiet as Sunset and Flash spoke and after a few minutes, Carl heard her leaving and Flash said

"Ok, you can come out"

Carl did but only showed his head to Flash while still under the table.

Carl nervously winced and slowly turned around and saw the girls heading over to him and he said in fright

"DAMMIT!" and he ran out the room as the girls pursued him into the hallway as they dodged students and teachers all around.

Carl kept running and Rainbow Dash was hot in pursuit as he managed to see a nearby janitors closet and jumped inside and locked the door with some nearby equipment to make a barricade as the girls pounded on the door shouting at him.

"Open the door darling!, We don't wanna hurt you!" Rarity said

"Kid, we know your in there!, just let us in!" Rainbow Dash said

"You can't hide forever!" Sunset said said

Carl realized they were right and his next class was in a few more hours and saw the door handle about to be opened and quickly began to search the room for any means of escape. He saw an vent at the top of the ceiling and used a stool to reach up and open it as he started to crawl up inside and close the lid.

The girls broke the door down and saw the room was empty and Rainbow Dash said

"Where'd he go?!"

The girls searched and as they looked, they heard footsteps in the vents and Fluttershy said

"Do you hear that?"

"Is he....in the air vents?" Rarity said

"Is he THAT desperate to avoid us?" Rainbow asked

Carl continued to crawl and move his way through the air vents as he searched for his next class, which was gym with Spitfire and as he crawled,he saw under the vents the girls heading somewhere and believing he has lost them said in relief.

"Ok, I think I lost them, time to find a way to gym."

Carl continued to try and find alternate routes that led to the gym and kept going until he ended up falling into another janitor's closet and groaned in pain as he got up. He opened the door and didn't see the girls and saw the gym was just away and ran to it and opened the door and said

Carl turned to run, but no matter where he ran, the girls cornered him. He managed to successfully to roll under Fluttershy and sprint to the bathroom and hid in one of the stalls. The girls got in and Sunset said

Carl, however did not say a word and continued to hide inside as Rainbow Dash kicked at the door repeatedly. As this happened Spitfire came in and said

The girls nodded and Rainbow said to Carl "We'll talk later."

Carl still did not answer until he heard footsteps and saw them leaving. He decided to leave and sighed with relief and got ready for class, hoping things don't turn out bad as last time

...................... 😐??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OKAY!!!!????? This IS something. But, I'm VERY SORRY AUTHOR, FOR THIS BUT:

WWWWWHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IN THE FRICKIN F************************* IS THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????? πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ‘ΉπŸ‘ΉπŸ‘ΉπŸ‘ΉπŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΊπŸ‘Ί :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage:

YOU just turn Carol, a Main character of the Walking Dead, WHO FACED ZOMBIES, VILLAINOUS HUMAN FRACTIONS LIKE THE GOVERNOR, AND NEGAN. And KNOWS HOW TO FIGHT AND KILL!!!!!!!! To make him RUN AWAY from NON-VIOLENT( Excluding Rainbow πŸ™„πŸ˜€), PACIFIST, GIRLS!!!!!!!!!!!! LIKE A DAMN COWARD AND A P****!!!!!!!!!!! 😀😀😀🀦🀦🀦

I'm NOT trying to be a Asshole to you. But, PLEASE FIX THIS, Because this is WAY OUT OF CHARACTER, And you might REALLY PISS OFF HARDCORE WALKING DEAD FANS, IF THEY SEE THIS CHAPTER, and get ALOT of Dislikes for this.


And also make the Rainbooms to STOP FRICKIN STALKING HIM!!!!! I Know, they are trying to Apologize for Rainbow of being a Asshole to him for NO reason. But, causing Carl to go to the FRICKIN AIR VENTS, is really a Dick Move on them.

CARL Doesn't want to deal with them, for NOW. Just AFTER they are getting him in trouble so many times. And instead of being a Coward or Pu***. He should grow a pair of BIG Balls and threatening to CALL his Dad, and EVEN THE COPS to file a Restraining Order on the Rainbows, for NOT leaving him alone!!!!!

IF this happened in REAL LIFE, that a couple of Students and EVEN TEACHERS see a bunch of Girls Chase a guy though a hallway very fast. AND made the Guy be very desperate to go to a Janitors closest, and to to the FRICKIN Air Vents! They should CALL 911, AND Arrest and file a Restraining Order on the Girls, on Harassing the Poor Guy.

And with that, Rick went off his job for the police and Carl ran his way to school and went to begin his classes and as he was walking past the halls, a few students began to give looks at him some with distrust or curiosity at his battle-hardened exterior.

For the "Distrustful " Students F*** you ALL!!!!!!! He's just a New Student here. You won't Survive in the Walking Dead World in 1 WEEK!!!!!!!!

Trixie, unbelieving this said in response "Your lying, you have to be, I don't know who you think you are, but just know this, I'm watching you."

Carl, however merely gave her an look and walked away with a sad look saying in his thoughts "I think I lost a friend."

"Its alright, Carl" Celestia said "she'll look beyond it and your friendship will return"

"I'm sorry you lost a friend, but it's ok, there are more then Trixie and the Illusions" Sunset comforted Carl

Me, carrying a HUGE and Strange Looking Bookbag: * Seeing this* Excuse me for a moment!!!

*Go's and PUNCH Trixie in the Face, using Brass Knuckles, and kick her in the "Private Area" with Heavy Lawn Spiked Boots.*

Main 5, Sunset, Celestia, Luna, and other Students: 😱😱 :pinkiegasp:
Carl:😳😳😳 DAMN!!!!!!!!

Me: Sorry, but THIS TRAITOROUS, ENVY BITCH HAD IT COMING!!!! Besides, I could have done ALOT WORSE!
* Shows Carl, EqGirls, the Principals, and other Students the HUGE BAG: Full of a bunch melee Weapons like Knifes, Machetes, Small and BIG Hammers, Axes, Baseball Bats, Bows and arrows, Crossbows, Swords, Pike and other Spears, Shield with Spikes, Maces, and Guns like Pistols, Semi Pistols, Assault and Semi Rifles, Shotguns, Sniper Rifles, Flamethrowers, Grenades, Soft and Heavy Armor, and even some GATLING Guns, and Rocket Launchers*.

Me: A LLLLLLOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT WORSE!!!!!!!! 😈😈😈😈😈 :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Carl: *While Shocked, but Impressed Somewhat.* 😳 πŸ‘Œ πŸ‘

Main five, Sunset, Celestia, Luna, other Students, and Especially Trixie: πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜°πŸ˜°πŸ˜°πŸ˜«πŸ˜«πŸ˜«πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€

Rainbow Dash, ticked off at this comment, gritted her teeth in anger and frustration and say 'There is NO WAY he is better then me at ANYTHING!!!"

WHAT ABOUT USING GUNS AND KILLING ZOMBIES AND VILLAINOUS HUMAN PSYCHOPATHS, AND SURVIVE THE ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE FOR YEARS!!!!!!!!! BITCH!!!!!! :twilightangry2: :flutterrage:

I have a idea for the NEW next chapter if you like it that is? That the Rainbooms keep harnessing Carol all day, or Trixie still being a envy bitch to him!!!!! Or even Celestia and Luna can't help him tell the Rainbooms off, because their "Nice" Students and are trying to Apologize to him!!! He FINALLY LOSE IT AND SAY:

WARNING: PROFANITY

Chapter: Carl Finally loses it and gives the longest RANT EVER IN Canterlot CITY!!!!!!!!!!

Carl: Okay! That is F**king ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!

Rainbooms, Celestia, Luna, other Students: 😳


Carl: What the F**k is WRONG with you alll!!!!!!!

Yes, I'm a new student and all, but what is with the distrust and anger for!?

I never F**king did anything done wrong on any of you!!!!!!! Like you Trixie for example, you just broke our friendship, just because I kept a Secret on being a GOOD singer and use instruments??

That's just very petty and BULLSHIT!!!!!!! Everyone got FRICKIN Secrets for once or twice in their entire life times, and don't let it being discovered to anyone except to their best friends or their family.

I guess you're a F**king TERRIBLE Friend if you can't handle some secrets. You Envy Bitch!!!!

And to you Principals, WHY didn't you help me on restricting the Rainbooms on following me.

You DO KNOW that Harassing and Stalking someone is F******** ILLEGAL!!! And I DON'T care if they Apologize for being F**KING Assholes to me. But, I'm NOT really, or even want to hear their LAME ASS excuses. When they keep following me like crazed girly fans!!!! It's VERY HARD to Forgive them like that.

And YOU, you arrogant and Prideful Rainbow BITCH!!!!!!!!! Just because I'm THAT GOOD, on gymnastics and Music, you think it's right to BULLY ME FOR IT!!!!!!! NEWSFLASH! NO ONE IS F**KING PERFECT!!!!! AND ESPECIALLY NOT YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Plus, I DO have some "Skills/Achievements" that NOT EVEN YOU have the GUTS, or EVEN rival to ME!!!!!!!I

Rainbow: Oh please!! What do YOU have that surpassed ME!!!! πŸ˜†


Carl: *Emotionless, but "SLIGHTLY" Pissed Off Tone*: What about having YOUR ENTIRE World F**king Ending by Walking Undead Zombies!!!?????

YEP, I'M NOT JOKING, ME and my DAD are from another EARTH that is infested with REAL LIFE ZOMBIES.

And can YOU stay SANE after seeing so many of your friends, including my own Biological MOM, my dad's second Wife/Step-Mother, and my Half-Sister all died horribly by the undead, and sometimes even reanimated as the Zombies themselves after death.

But NOT just the Zombies that we have to face, but to very psychotic and evil people too. Yes, we EVEN faced other people in evil groups as well, that has hunted, tortured, betrayed, RAPED, and killed a LOT of our group during the years.

And I have to use GUNS, KNIFES, and other WEAPONS to KILL A LOT of Zombies And EVEN other humans that are just too evil to live.

Just to make me and my remaining family and friends to just Survive! And me and my dad even loss body parts like my damn eye, and for dad; His right hand. But even ALL THAT F**KED UP shit that happened, Physically and Mentally!!!!!!

Me, my Father, and our remaining friends still SURVIVED and persistent for a better. But then, somehow me and my dad got teleported here, to YOUR WORLD! And not only I somehow got my own eye back, and it only left this scar here luckily. But my dad's hand also come back as well.

So, we basically got a second chance in life. But, I can't just FORGET what happened in our world, and seeing all of my previous friends, ESPECIALLY my two moms, and half-sister still gone, despite everything. πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“

CARL * Now is starting to Really lose his COOL in a second*:

Sometimes, I thought that with this new holy miracle to my dad and myself, by having this second chance. We could have new friends and possibly even a new family, and sorta move on in life. While still never forgetting and honoring our fallen love ones in our old world.

BUT, ALL OF THAT CAME TO SHIT!!!!!!!!

WHEN I ONLY JUST SET JUST ONE SINGLE FRICKIN FOOT ON THIS GODDAMN F**KING SCHOOL!!!!!! YOU'RE ALL LOOK AT ME AND MY FATHER LIKE WE WERE A BUNCH OF FREAKS, YOUR OWN PARIAHS, OR EVEN THE WALKING DEAD THEMSELVES.

AND WHEN I TRY TO DO THE CLASSES, ACTIVITIES, AND SHOW SOME TALENT LIKE ANY OTHER REGULAR STUDENT. YOU ALL JUST GET F**KING ENVIOUS ON ME FOR NO GOOD REASON, AND EVEN ASSAULTING ME. AND GOT ME IN TROUBLE FOR TRYING TO DEFEND MYSELF!!?? AT LEAST Flash, is the ONLY decent nice guy in this forsaken school to not act like a toxic and petty asshole, or stay friends with me.

I KNEW THIS SCHOOL IS A GODDAMN F**KING MISTAKE, AND I SHOULD HAVE JUST BEEN HOME SCHOOLED INSTEAD!!!!!! And you know what, if I have KNOWN that you SIX RAINBOOM BITCHIES, keep ASSAULTING, HARASSING, AND STALKING ME, FOR THE WHOLE SCHOOL YEAR!?

I SHOULD HAVE LET THOSE THUGS STEAL YOUR STUFF, INSTEAD OF SAVING YOU WITH THAT ARMOR I WAS WEARING. YEAH, THAT'S RIGHT. IT WAS ME!!!!!!!!!!

HECK, I SHOULD HAVE BROUGHT MY REVOLVER, AND SHOOT YOU IN BOTH OF YOUR SKINNY LEGS, AND ONE OF YOUR EYES MYSELF, YOU RAINBOW BITCH!!!! LET'S SEE HOW YOU CAN RUN WITH CRIPPLED LEGS OR ONE EYE, HUH!?

And IF ANY OF YOU HAVE SOMEHOW GET TELEPORTED TO MINE AND MY DAD'S WORLD. YOU WILL MAKE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE OF YOUR ENTIRE LIVES!

BECAUSE YOU ALL WOULDN'T SURVIVE A F**KING WEEK OR EVEN THREE DAYS WITH CANNIBAL ZOMBIES/WALKING DEAD, AND/OR VERY VIOLENT, RAPIST, AND PSYCHOTIC KILLER PEOPLE that you would meet in our journey.

And EVEN IF YOU DIE, you can still be REANIMATED AS THE ZOMBIES THEMSELVES!!!!!!! And be forced to eat your remaining FRIENDS/FAMILY!! I HOPE YOU ALL SUFFER ETERNALLY IN MY WORLD, YOU PRIDEFUL, PETTY, TOXIC, ENVIOUS, HYPOCRITICAL, AND ARROGANT F**KING ASSHOLES!!!!!!!!!!! 😠😠😠😠😠😈😈😈😈😈 :flutterrage: :twilightangry2: :pinkiegasp:


Main 5, Especially Rainbow Dash, Sunset, Trixie, Celestia, Luna, Other Students, and Teachers: 😳😳😳😲😲😲
😱😱😱 😰😰😰 :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :fluttercry: :fluttershbad: :fluttershysad: :fluttershyouch: :pinkiesick: :twilightoops:


Carl: WHAT????!!!!!! :rainbowhuh: :trixieshiftleft:


* Carl have JUST REALIZED that he told EVERYONE of his HORRIBLE and F**KED UP Past of his and Dad's World, filled with Zombies and evil people. And he also told the Rainbooms that HE is the one that save them from the crooks. And also very insulted, and threatened them to shooting them himself.

But, wish for them to SUFFER ETERNALLY by the Zombies and Evil Humans/People.* 😳😳😳😳😳😳 :twilightoops: :applejackconfused:

*Carl knew he F**KED UP BADLY, due to his great but was somewhat Justified FURY on the Rainbooms and other CHS Students. But, he also knows that he and Dad got a HUGE EXPLAINING to do after saying all that!!!!!!!!!*: πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜₯ 😳 OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH FFFFFFFFFFF-------------------------------------------- ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘!

To be Continued

Next Chapter: The horrifying and traumatizing Truth!

Rick: I Know you're really Pissed Off, and I should have STOPPED this MISTREATED STUPIDNESS in the first place! But you had One Job Son, OOOONNNNEEEEE JJJJJJOOOOOOOBBBBBBB!!!! 🀦🀦🀦:facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof:

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I apologize if I sound Aggressive here. I may NOT be a hardcore Walking Dead fan. But, the characters should have been treated WAY BETTER than this. I just REALLY hate very Hardcore, Badass, and OverPowered, Heroes or Protagonists being treated to very WEAK and NAIVE Kid show Heroes like the Eq Girls like that!!!!

I mean, the Kid: Carl, have faced ZOMBIES AND EVIL PSYCHOPATH PEOPLE in the show. And KNOWS HOW to USE a lot of Guns and other weaponry. And Seeing him get BULLIED like that to the Rainbooms, and other CHS Students, for very dumb and stupid reasons like Jealously!!!!!!!!!


What would happen if THAT were to happened to Batman, Master Chief, Doom Slayer, Kratos, Marcus Felix and Delta Squad, Goku and Vegeta, and the Resident Evil and Dead Space Protagonists!!!!!!?????

Do YOU really think, that they will just let very Naive and Stupid High School Students do that to them!??????!!!!!!!! :ajbemused: :ajbemused: :ajbemused: :ajbemused: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2:


P.S. I just want to HELP the author to Fix this by: Editing, or rewrite it entirely, before REAL Walking Dead Fans come here. And really TRASH TALK the author for it! :twilightoops: :twilightoops: :twilightoops: :twilightoops:

Sort of a interesting read I think.
Wonder how things go with Spike when he pops in soon?

Are you gonna Update this???!!! And please, DON'T make Carl into a Doormat P**sy! And STOP making Rainbow, Trixie, Rainbooms, and the CHS Students into pure Bullying Assholes, and Bitches to Carl.


Carl can just KICK all of their Asses, and can even down right Shoot them if he has too. Like the Zombies, and the Crazy and Bad People back in his original Walking Dead World.

Author? Did you actually read my previous comments from long ago? And are you gonna update this story?

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