Rainbow Dash and Spitfire have been dating for a while now, and today is the official sit-down meal with the parents. But Rarity arrives with Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo in tow with upsetting news. Rainbow then decides that it's time to call for an emergency friendship meeting. There, after Rarity unveils a long-held revelation, Sunset (struggling with her ptsd) and Twilight leave the room upset for different reasons. Rainbow and Spitfire then take it upon themselves to decode why, and ensure that their friends are all taken care of...
...but can they do so?
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Part of my Extended Equestria Girls Continuity arc.
Sex tag for mention of sexual activity.
Profanity tag for some naughty words.
This was written in 2018 and uploaded in February 2019 but I didn't publish it until now. Happy Pride 2020 🏳️🌈
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Great story!
great story
So Poland and Germany.
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As an old school pegasister, this line put the biggest grin on my face.
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This was great, thank you.
I found one of your other stories earlier and have been skipping around through your chronology because I just instantly fell in love with your writing. Your dialogue has this beautiful bounce and liveliness to it that helps the emotions really hit home, and the emotions are high and your stories are rife with all sorts of wonderful drama.
In general, there's this flow that makes your writing just naturally fun to read-- I was actively and constantly engaged in and excited to turn the next page, so to speak. You also, I feel, have a really good grasp of the economy of a story so to speak-- of knowing exactly what to show and when to cut away or skim over or leave as hint or implication, and that just adds to how engaging your writing is. I'm continually encouraged to read closely because if I'm not paying attention I could miss a hint towards figuring out the exact details of all the drama going down. It's really well crafted and fun to read!
Beyond that, I love the characterizations you hand out and the headcanons you play with-- it always makes me happy to see some good trans stories on here. Better yet, you handle everything-- touching on difficult or dark topics-- with this respectful ease and grace that prevents it from feeling gratuitous or exhausting.
Thank you so much for sharing your writing on here, and I look forward to seeing anything else you care to show!
I swear Twilight was CIS in TFW
i thought Scoots dead to Dash. How did she get her to give her a second chance?
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This is several years- and plot points- later