Canterlot Castle is being remodeled, Princess Luna and Princess Celestia are relocating to Twilight's, and Spike and Starlight are feeling relegated into second-tier guests at la casa de Twilight. How many princesses can one castle withstand?
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This is classic stuff
Have an fave from me an my hope this will be good
I'm calling it now, the castle will soon have a full-blown Trollestia epidemic to deal with.
P.S. Have a like.
This has potential so I'll be keeping watch. I feel though the scenes are a bit short and lack characterization. Good luck, however!
Oh, I really like where this is going! Very funny, very interesting!
At least Flurry Heart is here also what about their pets?
Earl grey tea, hot. Warm. Luke-warm. No, hot. Celestia prefers her tea near-scalding hot.
Ah yes, the "Captain" of Equestria enjoys her tea just like a certain starship captain...
"Tea. Earl Grey. Hot"
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Celestia enjoy her tea scalding hot because she is the princess of the sun
But I like the comparison to Star Trek too, even though it wasn't intentional.
No! Go away! There's too many princesses in this castle as it is! If this is somepony's idea of a joke, it is in very bad taste.
Cadance, Shinng Armor and Flurry Heart: ... ... ...
I know that's not what's gonna happen, but I couldn't help but think of that scene in The Hobbit.
Well, this is gonna be fun. I expect to see crazy Twilight very soon.
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Yeah, I got your meaning. Celestia the Sun.
Hmm... for that matter, what's a bet she loves hot vindaloo curries aswell ??
The title of this story is very much like most titles of The Big Bang Theory episodes. I'm guessing Twilight will be the Sheldon of this story?
Only one issue bugs me, why are there no rooms for the princesses? I've got believe there are more than 3 bedrooms in Twilight's castle, so we kind of need a reason the other's can't be used.
Is it weird that I’m hearing a sitcom laughtrack while reading this?
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That's the reason.
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I'm really dating myself, but I get this reference. I even have the theme song in my head now.
"We have a castle with so many rooms that ponies get lost on a regular basis, but it only has two guest rooms?!"
Yeah, not buying it. The Tree's just being cheeky.
Unusual.
What does "reviews not solicited" mean?
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It just means I'm not asking for detailed reviews. I don't write these stories to have them critiqued, and have had several times in the past where people took it upon themselves to critique them very heavily/negatively. Reviews as in long detailed, thorough critiques, not just simple comments.
I can't help but feel that the princesses would've chosen the other roommates. Luna has said before she feels a certain kinship with Starlight, and Celestia knew Spike since he was a baby. Though maybe that latter fact would be awkward, but I find it rather strange that Luna would just decide on the spot that she'll stay with Spike.
Other than that, seems like a really entertaining premise, definitely following!
This is a very interesting story. If it had a teen rating it could be made into a sitcom. You know, just to play it safe.
Interesting, please continue.
Tirek's teeth, Twilight, I didn't think there were that many books in all of Canterlot! That you even managed to find enough to fill ALL the guest rooms and libraries in that TARDIS-tree-house of yours is both remarkable and disturbing. (Seriously, that castle has to be dimensionally transcendental with a compression ratio of about ten to fit all the hallways and massive rooms that we see in interior shots.)
And of course Cadence and Shining are here too. What are the odds? I wonder what's wrong with their palace?
This is hilarious :)
i guess flurry was bad and destroy the castle.
I feel bad for the nobles if they do something to twilight library,
Alas
Next morning.
Spike. Can you tell the others I'll be out for awhile.
Uh, sure. But where you going?
I'm spending some time with Sunset and the girls.
Okay. But for how long?
Until this castle is no longer infested with alicorns! One is enough thank you very much!
... Can I go with you?
Not sorry.
Twilight's castle has dozens and dozens of rooms!!!
This is great. I'm glad you're updating again.
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A castle with enough hallways to get lost in with ease, and rooms to match, and Twilight can't find room for more than two guests...
Methinks the castle is doing this on purpose.
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If it helps the plot become more believable, sounds good to me
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For the sake of comedy? Yes.
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Do you? Because I have no idea yet.
My head canon is that Starlight's mom has been dead since she was a baby. So she liked being held by Celestia because it reminds her of something she lost.
Great to see a new chapter!
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! That was bloody brilliant. PLEASE let this come up later, this is TOO good of an idea to waste.
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Count on it
Good to see an update. Can We get another?
Twilight, you're the physical embodiment of magic. What's so hard about a dimensional transcendence spell?
Surprised Spike doesn’t move his basket.
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Actually, she isn't. There are ponies better and more powerful with magic then her. (Starlight, Starswirl, Celestia, Luna)
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Nope, Twilight isn't. Starlight doesn't need to be nerfed. She's perfect the way she is.
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I wouldn't be sure about Starlight. Starlight vs Twilight is a point of contention.
I myself am heavily biased towards Twilight, so I can't really say anything from an objective standpoint without trying to, and I don't really have the time or energy for that right now. Also, judging by your other comment, I'm guessing that your biased towards Starlight. Perhaps we could have a friendly discussion about their magical prowess.
Heh, we're getting to see the hidden sides of the princesses. I wonder what more will come.
Also, I had a thought when I got to the part where Twilight mentioned sleeping in the library: it'd be funny to imagine the option of using the Equestria Girls world as a refuge..
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Yeah, like morion87 said!
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Actually Twilight was unable to beat Starlight Glimmer in terms of a magic fight. So she's not more powerful. At least not in official canon, and we've seen plenty of canon limitations on her magical power (Twilight's magical power). Heck even when Twilight's giving her a "real challenge" she doesn't break a sweat.
And Starlight doesn't need a nerf. She has plenty of weaknesses ... just not any where magic is involved. Starlight has Crippling Overspecialization when it comes to magic. But outside of magic is either average, or below average than an ordinary pony. And taking away her magic / anti-magic field, makes her next to useless.
So yeah I agree with 9205994, she's perfect the way she is.