A few hobbies of mine would be animating, drawing, and writing. Wouldn't it be crazy if I got a job that includes one of those in the future? ...Pfft... Naaah....
Laughter was always Discord's favourite element. Yet he'd always seen Pinkie as a... well... 'not so bright' pony. He was wrong.
She's a lot like him, actually.
---
This isn't a shipfic... well, unless you want it to be. But this idea just came to mind when I was bored.
Page generated in 0.124 seconds
Total duration
913 users online
1,930,587 hits today, 2,673,812 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Very cute! And nicely characterized for both of them.
I might suggest rephrasing:
It seems to state that Pinkie Pie both forgave Discord and betrayed Equestria. The actual meaning is still clear from context, but it did give me a bit of a record-scratch "whut?" moment while reading, in the midst of a story that otherwise has a nice, relaxed and clear narrative flow. Perhaps "... he still owed her for his betrayal and her forgiveness"?
4728040
Thanks for reading
Reading back, that phrase does sound weird. Thanks for pointing it out
I think it's perfect not as a ship fic. Not everything must be shipped, and it's nice to see a chaotic FRIENDSHIP
4729275
Yeah, there's a lot of shipfics with Discord and Fluttershy or Pinkie, I prefer them as friends.
Celestia however... shipfic away.
4728198
NP. Actually, I felt kinda butt about leaving a criticism as the very first comment, but then I also gave it the first thumbs-up.
Totally agree that the show needs more Pinkie-and-Discord interactions. It's such a natural comedy goldmine! Add that to the Season Five wishlist: an episode where those two team up to solve a problem everypony else is too serious to handle.
Edit/P.S.: googling "cotton candy cake" returns a bunch of recipes... and a nursing bra. Apparently the "Cake" brand of bras has a model called "Cotton Candy". TIL.
4729825 Oh, don't feel bad for giving critique, I always like to improve my writing C:
That can be added to my wishlist. Make that happen Meghan.
And now I feel like making a cotton candy cake.
I think pinkecord is a better ship than Cel.....cord? Celestacord? Distia? Disctia? WELL ANY WAY ITS BETTER!
4736139
Discopie and Dislestia,
5210271 meh close enough