COMPLETE FIC! Delivering on Sweetness & Beyond!

EDelivering on Sweetness & Beyond

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

When Derpy and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a parallel dimension of sweet and innocent ponies, things go awry, and Ocean Mist, protégé of Kimono, learns a lesson as she overcomes her limitations to help them out

• Crossover
• Derpy

abrony-mouse · 16k words · 175 views

The cute, slice of life comedy is finally done! Delivering on Sweetness & Beyond was very sweet to write. Thanks so much to the G3 pony crowd in a certain server for their help and support

“Any ideas?” Derpy asks.

“Yes. Miss—”

Crafty begins.

“Shh! She’s thinking,” Derpy interrupts.

It was one of the first fables that Kimono had taught Ocean. The ancient tale of the 'Bundle of Sticks' was about an unruly family: the mother gave each sibling a stick to break but while it was easy to break them individually, combined, even the strongest were unable.

‘I have to get everypony to help!’ she thinks.

Ocean’s face goes hot with embarrassment as she is shooed from the room.

Once outside, she shoots a look to the departing violet tail.

‘You will be the middle stick!’ she promises.

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The Songs of the Fic

We should shine a light on
A light on
And the book of right-on's right on
It was right on