Nopony likes injections. Certainly, nobunny likes them either.
Unfortunately for Angel, a certain pegasus is determined that he recieves his shot...and nothing is going to stop her.
Completely mad, balding superhero :D
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I might have seen an error or two in there. Nothing too major, though. I very much enjoyed reading it (and the name for the title was simply genius). I can tell that this will take a spot in the feature spot. I just know it.
Cheers to you, Greatodyer.
A very cute story. Although, I'm pretty sure Ponyville has an official vet (as seen in Secret to My Excess), but I can see the reason for making Fluttershy a vet given her talent with animals. Other than that, it was very well written and very funny. MUSTACHES!![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
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Angel's self-titled debut story!
...I kid, Angel's the best.
Very cute and pretty funny. Everypony sounded in-character and it felt like part of an episode. Not too many flaws to worry about, though I wasn't sure about the bits of narration from Angel's POV. But it all works out great!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
What I want to know is whether that unicorn ended up getting her muffins.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
I swear, Angel is the single most annoying pet I have seen. I'd tackle him to the ground to give him the shot.![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
Seriously though: nice work on this very entertaining short tale. It could use a few more mustaches though.
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Perfect![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
Very well written, and very funny to boot.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Enjoyed it all the way through sooo yes good job!
I've been waiting for this, and you delivered. I love it.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Why have I not read your stuff before? This was excellent!
Good sir, you have my attention.
Oh, now I get the joke. You dirty lil' thing, you.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Whew.... now that was a chase I know I could never keep up with.![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
But at least Fluttershy caught Angel, and he agreed to let her give him the injection.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
That title works on two levels. Angel can be quite the prick.
This was an enjoyable read, even if I am rather more pro-Angel than many! No doubt about my favourite aspect of the story: the really good comedy. This fic has great comic timing, especially in the more physical comedy. That made it a whole lot of fun to read. Clever title, too, and I thought the Angel-POV sections worked quite well on the whole.
It could have done with one more proofreading pass, though, as there are several technical blips. Most notably, rabbits are not rodents: they're lagomorphs. The occasional iffy word choice, typo ("vetinarian") and the dreaded "it's" for "its" inevitably drag it down just a little bit.
Still, those are mostly minor problems and this story's good points well outweigh the bad. An amusing story that I don't have a lot of trouble imagining actually happening in-universe.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)