“In a world filled with misery and uncertainty, it is a great comfort to know that, in the end, there is a light in darkness.”
The story of a young Englishman (Anon) who came to live in France who had the misfortune to fall on an old fallen lord. He will eventually be a young filly and to be adopted under the watchful eye of one who will become what one will believe of his imaginary friend but also of the author of his torment: Lord Hatred.
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Oooh... This looks interesting...
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Thank you, feel free to suggest ideas for the next chapter if you have any ideas for challenge.
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K.
I just read the description and I couldn't help but wonder about the events that lead to pbb and carrot top winding up together
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I did not mention it but do not worry, they will be in the next chapters. I prefer to introduce in the first place the characters for later to be able to talk about it.
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That's fine
9524026
You mean like after he (she) is adopted he has to wear a dress or his parents sign him up for ballet classes?
See if you can find what's wrong here
Looks mighty interesting
It is already on hiatus?
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Multiple things.
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My point
So... either Discord or Hazama, basically.
I see a contradiction here.
Published barely a day ago and its already on hiatus?
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Thank you for pointing it out and now correct.
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May be.
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Sorry I made a mistake.
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Lord Hatred:
" Yes, that Anon's humiliations begin. "
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By way of explanation, I'll just put this here.
https://ytcropper.com/cropped/tK5c97aa5647b31
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Oh maybe even a beauty pageant that would be humiliating or his (her) mom signs her up for filly scouts or he (she) gets invited to a slumber party and her mom makes her go.
Grammarly
More please
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The next chapter is coming soon.
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Ok then
Well will she be put in a dress or something soon?
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In the next chapter.
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Oh Okay
Fun fact: Al Capone ""officially"" was listed as a Used Furniture Salesman.
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Lord Hatred:
" I also worked for some time in accounting with him! "
I feel like anon will stay in equastria because lore hate lied
So I take it Hatred is based off of/related to Sombra in some way?
It seems like this story was originally in a different language then just put in Google translate. There are a lot of sentence structure errors
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No, the magic of King Sombra is based on fear and a scope related to his user. While Lord Hatred is fed by his hatred that allows him any type of thing according to his quantity.
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I'm really sorry, my english is not very good and I have to use a certain translator. I write at the base in French and I'm looking for a proofreader
to correct me.
Oh dance class what kind ballet will he have to wear a tutu?
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Yes, and it will be very embarrassing. *laught*
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Oh and the ballet slippers with ribbons that wrap up his legs I figure you'll use those as well.
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Great idea, I had in mind an outfit in the same kind that you described who will be in the next chapter. If you have any other idea for the challenge of Anon even a little crazy do not hesitate!
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How about the dance teacher ties his mane in a bun and he has to wear silk gloves too and stockings under the slipper ribbons oh and maybe they are enchanted so they don't come off till after the teachers says class is over.
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Any luck yet? Or still looking for editor(s)?
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Would you be interested?
I'm still looking for.
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I could try. Are you looking for someone to help with sentence structure or just spelling and auto correct mistakes?
Is the fairy dragon supposed to be that creepy?
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A bit of both. But rather it would have focused on the errors of orthography present in the text.
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No, it's a reference to my favorite game: heroes of might and magic 3. I wanted to accentuate the strange side of Lord Hatred's character.
That went down really quickly. The last chapter gave me the impression that Lord Hatred was going to embarrass him repeatedly, but this is way worse. Not deadly, at least right now, but there's no way that's good for Anon.
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So mostly the combined meaning of the words? Does this include the order?
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Yes, I do not know if it still interests you but it would be about that.