This story is a sequel to 404: Romance Not Found
Twilight buys Rarity the perfect gift to celebrate their relationship.
Too bad it's cursed.
Just a gal writing about gals bein pals
This story is a sequel to 404: Romance Not Found
Twilight buys Rarity the perfect gift to celebrate their relationship.
Too bad it's cursed.
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Fun story, good speech by Twilight about why it reminds her of Rarity, even if we got it twice.
The best way to deal with a ghost is ALWAYS counciling.
So, can Twilight get her money back? I mean, the store owner was selling her a super cursed gemstone. That's gotta be mega illegal.
Mono confirmed to emit Raritwi radiation. I recommend lead shielding.
In all seriousness, lovely story. Not my preferred pairing, but still a wonderfully engaging read.
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It's too late. We are all contaminated. Best to just let it happen.
I loved it, but I honestly think it was short and somewhat fast paced. I guess that's to be expected seeing as the the first story was so much longer.
I think you should expand upon this more. Maybe write a full fledged sequel that's as long if not longer than the first story
Kinda good but...is that it?
Go back to Ankh-Morpork, Dibbler. Leave the pony girls alone.
Hhnnnnngggg, I loved it!
Also hubba hubba, RariTwi in the tubba
No, no, no, no, we put a warning label on it, we don't have any liability- aggh! Ow! Oh!
All ship-fic authors should really ask themselves this question frequently
This is incredible Raritwi :)
You motherfucker.
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I highly suspect that if they returned to that location, the shop would no longer be there.
This little story is great. I love seeing uncommon ships done well.
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It wouldn't surprise me if there was a box on the ground where the shop once was and it contains the $800 that Twilight paid for it.
Extra period. Also, I think the POV shift was abrupt and hard to follow.
Other than that, this was
c o u n t r y
l i c k i n g
g o o d
as was the rest of twilight and rarity's evening, I'm sure
Uh oh!
Shouldn't have bought it Twilight.
At least she got her wish still.
Exactly!