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"... okay, I have another plan!"

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Garden Grove, an every day student of Crystal Prep has a job of running her own little store in the city. Today she continues to help friends in need, and go on her every day life.

This is just a bit of fluff I'd thought I'd write. Wanted to try an experiment. Hope you guys enjoy it. Comments are appreciated. I'd love to read your comments.

Cover art doesn't belong to me.

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Comments ( 11 )

I like this kind of stories where other background characters are given more attention. :yay:

7520312 well I do plan on making more like these.

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Maybe doing a Sweet Leaf one shot?

7521299 Maybe. Just... maybe.

You set the scene pretty well with the walk to the flower shop.

I was never thrilled about the Friendship Games mostly because honestly they're a complete bore. We always beat CHS, and every time they have a party to welcome us, its never any fun. Mostly because all of us hate each other to no end.

...This almost makes it sound like Garden Grove has gone to multiple Friendship Games. But I thought they were only held once every four years...

Also, a girl buying roses to give to her date is a pretty big tip off, so I'm not sure why she thought her brother didn't know.

You've got an uphill battle here getting me to latch on to such little-known characters, so I'm looking forward to seeing more of their personalities in chapters to come!

7522038 As for the multiple Friendship Games thing, here's my reason. When Rainbow Dash showed the book with the CPA students winning and the CHS students winning, they looked the same age as they currently were in the movie, which is why I refused to believe the games only go for once every four years.

And I do plan on making more of these. If you look, I have a blog post attached to this story saying if you guys want me to make more stories with these background characters. Just scroll through, and you'll find it.

7522059 More of-

Ohhh, wait, is this a one-shot? Or will there be more chapters about Garden Grove?

7522066 Maybe. And maybe some more stories regarding these background characters. Just look for the blog post regarding Background CPA characters, and you'll see what I mean. I hope. Here's the link.

http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/668237/crystal-prep-background-character-story-ideas

Huh. This is pretty nice. It seems like just a normal day.

7522234 Yeah I wanted to go with a slice of life story.

Ah, a mini-prolouge to your other story! :yay: Very nice!

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