Just a hobbyist writer with aspirations of making a career in it.
Summer break is fast approaching after a rough year of college for Twilight and her friends. Wanting nothing more than to enjoy the next two months, only one obstacle stands in the way of summer bliss. This end-of-the-year performance by the Rainbooms promises to be a memorable one.
This fic is tied into my Hive Series. Reading that series is not necessary, but it does help a little.
Big thanks to my editors: A Bitter Pill, and Boldish42
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New story by LAP? Added to the Must Read Later list :D
Ohh a new story from you. This should be good.
Priorities, Twilight; the first question should be 'who used an energy weapon on the concert stage?'
Can you feel you're head
Interesting, I want to see where you go with this story. Too many EQG stories tend to ignore that magic is a thing, yet this story seems to be openly tackling it. I've high hopes.
Wow...an EQG college fic, and a post-FG one with nerd Twilight. Wonderful!
Oh, and to judge it by its first chapter, this one's going to be GOOOOOOD!!!!!!
Nice!
6488138 same here its like 1:08 am where I am now
A good and well written story. Although, it's not (yet) explained which agency the Feds are from! Though I'm guessing that will probably be explained in a later chapter?
I want to know what happened with the guys from Guam?
if she is changing I wonder if itr will affect er eyes? Really hate the glasses.
Yep, this is looking pretty good so far. A few years after high school with magic still around, and apparently magic having been around for a while. And now an attack on the band that seems to have boosted their magic. And was that a noodle incident I spied with those men from Guam? Definite interest spiked here.
our friendly Law Abiding Pony has done it again. Favorited, and waiting fore next chapter.
First chapter isnt enough to make an opinion about this story, i need more. Knowing LAP local Twilight might end up as princess of human-pony hybrids or start to lay eggs with said hybrids inside.
I am VERY interested to see where this goes. I made a wise choice following your work.
You get a like from me. Lets do this.
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6506215 Why does that particular pic of Sweetie Belle remind me somehow of Jackie Gleason as Ralph Kramden?
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I thought I saw FBI somewhere in there, but i could be wrong.
DUn DUn DUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!
It's obvious, they are all turning into ponies.
And the 'villains' are obviously Queen Chrysalis and the changelings' EqG doubles.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
21:35_10/11/2015
No, no! They're playing with forces they don't understand! You don't just get burned when you play with fire like this, you set the world ablaze! The fools!
Itchy shoulder blades Sunset? Caiing it now. She's an Alicorn.
Ive never seen anyone else use this sort of Idea before. This is looking to be another Epic story.
Oops! Looks like CB-style "increased background magic causes transformation" scenario!
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Or maybe it is just a patch of golden fur.
6518408 doubt it the shoulder blades is right where wings would show up in a humanoid form.
>it get's better, right?
>it get's better
>get's
I'm definitely liking this so far. The timeskip to college, the cooperative fed involvement, the horn growing, the SoarinDash (especially their scene this chapter, yowzers!).
Oh boy, yellow light? Transformations? Sounds like a bit of Discord coming to the mix!
Dun dun dun!
Never before have I read a single incomplete fic that made me want to follow an author that has more than one fic posted. Congrats on being the first.
out of all story this is a first (in a way), I think I have read 1 or3 story of the humand turing pony or sunset did anyway.
but to this story, IT ROCK, rainbow should probley listing to her friend some more but it rainbow what can you do. also why she not my most fave chater but not the worst(to much). I hope every thing is going to be alright and the main7 can fix things but till than please keep up the awesome ch coming and I look forward to more ch and story
There is an EQG tag, use that instead of the Human or Anthro tag.
Brilliant as usual
well worth the wait
I really look forward to reading more of this. It's a bizarre enough premise, and my favorite kind of "magic has gone out of control" premise from Equestria Girls universe.
Smells like chaos... The resonance is getting stronger!
Keep going! ;)
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I agree that they should replace the human tag with the EQG tag, but I think the anthro tag should stay, what with nature of their transformations and all.
why cant i like this more then once
You asked for it!
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AAHHH!! I was supposed to do that!
Cant believe that slipped by me... and my editors.
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People just love messing with forces beyond their control, am I right?
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Thanks!
Like this story so far, gonna track and like. And why do people always mess with forces they cannot hope to control
Emr..
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Sorry, I can't make any sense of this chapter, starting on why Twilight is a changeling. Wasn't she chainging into a pony like Dash?
6792157 Both Twilights are there and sicne the Hive tie in won The Equestria Twilight was reborn as a changeling before Eg1 had happened.
Looks like my version of Queen Twilight was smarter then this one.
6792173 ....
Nope, still not making sense.
6792218 have you read the Hive series?
6792258 Nope (again!
), though by context I imagine it's an AU where Twilight Sparkle is a changeling.
6792281 yup. after Discord's reform but before alicornization she was attacked. the only way to save her was to turn her into a changeling.
6792347 just fact. I have a spinoff of the Hive series and by history mine did have the gaurds to prevent SS from taking the crown.
That song was absolutely perfect for that scene. I was laughing so hard! :
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