Celestia, of all ponies, actually has it harder than you think. She cannot handle her sister's death.
I LOVE TWILIGHT AND FLUTTERSHY AND VINYL SCRATCH AND LUNA AND I LIKE FANFICTIONS AND IMA PEGASISTER BUT REALLY IM A UNICRON AND MY SPECIAL TALENT IS WATER BENDING OKAY BYEEEE
Celestia, of all ponies, actually has it harder than you think. She cannot handle her sister's death.
Gha!
I think there's a interesting story in here somewhere and I didn't notice anything outright wrong with the text itself, but please add a space between paragraphs!
You're not restricted by printing cost here, and it makes it much easier to read.
And I personally don't mind it, but a lot of people find colored text for speech very tacky and distracting. Unless you find it a must for the story you intend to tell I'd recommend changing it since it's only a single line at the moment.
Hope that helped.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
4197336 Thank you very much for your feedback. I will solve this problem quickly.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Wow that was great
Kinda short
Short and yucky but I still like it
4217885 That's...good?![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Well whatever, glad you like it
There's no more?
4217922 Not yet, friend. I will write more tonight, but please be patient.
4219226 Alright I like your Pic
4222225 Very Many thank you. I was thinking on changing it but maybe it wil stay![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
4222600 No problem I made one myself
4222701 It looks like the pony's on fire. It's amazing![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
4222706 Thanks I named him flame heart
4222709 Have you written anything? I'd love to read it.
4224053 Well I'm trying but its not working so well I need alot of help
4224236 I'm willing to lend a hoof![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
4226117 Really I can send you what I made so far and you can edit if you want I really would ont mind![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
4226904 Well sure, if you don't mind me changing a couple things.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
#TrueTrueFriend
4229273 Sure thing I will send it to you bye Message
Not bad so far
Is this story done yet or what?![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
4704778 I haven't been working on it as much. I'm stuck for ideas.![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
are you okay?
4706707 I'm fine what about yourself![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
4708395 I'm okay if you're okay.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
4709674 Anyway where do you talking to me now I like sent you 50 messages![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
4709807 I answered all of them, but you never said anything back! The last one you sent me I answered it twice!!!![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
4713613 I never got any from you
I'm going to talk to an admin about this messaging problem
4713695
![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
But the weird thing is that fanofmares has been talking to me, and we haven't had this problem. Btw, I blocked him. He's a douche.
Thanks though
4718405 Fanof who?![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
4718405 A colt who calls himself fanofmares, or fan of mares or whatever. He said he knew you in real life, and that you two were friends. If he lying?![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
4718713![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
I do answer your messages...they never reach you.
4750560 never![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
4750586 I'm gonna see if there's something i can do. ttyl![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
4755649 Alright![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
4756390 I can't get ahold of an admin![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
4807236 So? I don't really care anymore![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
4807236 So? I don't really care anymore![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
4813661 Oh uh...ok....