My name is... Well, just call me sparky, all my friends call me that science I've always love to experiment with electricity. I'm not talking about small circuitry i'm talking about big mad scientist Tesla-coils. and Jacobs ladders. Ya, now you see why my nickname fits so well. I'm also a brony. Have been since I was 12. I'm 15 now. my only family is my mom and my dog. And this is my story.
The characters in this story belong to who ever owns them and i'm not going to use anyone's oc's unless they ask me to.
Character tags will be added when needed
This story is rated teen for some cursing and innuendos later on in the story.
I don't have the time to do any thing with this story, so any one can use anything from it as long as you credit me. And send me a link so I can read/enjoy your spin on things.
Hm...Continue.
.....THE MARK OF A GOOD STORY LADIES AND GENTLEMEN.
Pretty much your trademark average self-insert red-and-black Alicorn OC HiE fic. I suggest you read the guide on writing fanfiction posted on this site and others.
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Oh lawdy...
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my oc is not going to be an allicorn (that's just my profile pic). just human. and no this character does not reflect my personality in the least.
but I will take your advice
Not bad
very good story so far.
i like it!
I hope he update the story...
*watch the page and see they have nothing update*
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no seriously your story is awesome, so...
*point a gun*
UPDATE !
Sorry this story will not be updating for a while. but it WILL update eventually and I have another 2 story ideas I've thought about inspired by different fics that I may write in the future.
I love your writing style and the story line, UPDATE
You get a moustache,
is it just me or all good story's seem to take a long time to update? like this one. don't get me wrong I can what for an update if need to be.
You sunova bitch
I kid, I kid
not bad so far win when the next chap be done?
Why was my comments deleted
Hey, good story. You mind adding my three chars to your story? They need some attention as they are profiled here, and so far, nopony's taken up the call. If you'd like, you could make Summer Dash a boss for Sparky to fight, as a sort of initial misunderstanding to work through. Won't be easy to do with words... Summer's wolf form brings with it a love of battle only satiable by a conclusion to such...
Switchlock will likely be inclined to study Sparky's powers alongside Twilight. He'll just do it in more discreet and deceitful ways, until he comes to trust him. Then, he'll be so much more considerate, and open.
And then there's Emerald Symphony. She might orchestrate songs for him, once he gets famouse enough... of course, as with powers go for many of my characters, there are InFamous type decisions to make that will effect what songs are orchestrated, and how.
3211523 Is 5'6-7" for a 15 year old very tall? I'm 14 and am 5'9" but wouldn't consider myself tall for my age.
...what this chapter is missing a big part of it.
WHAT THE F*UCK!? WHERES THE REST!?
FINISH IT YOU BRILLIANT BASTARD!!!
This is a great story so far, no?
*Kisses you on both cheeks like a frenchman
then puts your hand up*
This is a winner right here!