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EScouting Starshine
MLP Gen 5
Sad
Slice of Life
On Father's Day, Sunny writes a letter to her father to inform him of recent events in her life.
Other
Sunny Starscout
Argyle
SuperPinkBrony12 · 1.3k words · 81 views
TiSpy
Equestria Girls
Dark
Slice of Life
Thriller
Twilight is a fascinating person, and anyone who knows her would naturally be curious to get a closer look at what makes a girl like her tick: likes, dislikes, habits, and interests. But how close is too close? Will you cross the line?
Human
Micro Chips
Sci-Twi
Timber Spruce
SwordTune · 1.4k words · 15 0 · 253 views
EReturn of the Washouts
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
Thriller
(Takes place within the universe of "A Captain's Reflection".) Not long after becoming captain of the Wonderbolts, Rainbow Dash faces an unexpected problem when Lightning Dust and the Washouts issue a challenge.
Rainbow Dash
Spitfire
Other
Wonderbolts
Lightning Dust
SuperPinkBrony12 · 5.3k words · 11 2 · 242 views
EFlurry's Favorite Dragon
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
(A semi-sequel to "Princess Meets Princess" and "Sun and Flurries".) Flurry Heart visits Spike after learning that he'll become the next dragon lord. In particular, she hopes to confide in him her own worries about her own responsibilities.
Spike
Flurry Heart
SuperPinkBrony12 · 2.1k words · 17 0 · 287 views
TRumors of Trixie’s demise
MLP: FiM
Drama
For Trixie, there is a fate worse than death.
Suicide / Self Harm
Twilight
Trixie
Thesmokinguy · 3.8k words · 43 3 · 608 views
EDyson Sphere
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sci-Fi
Slice of Life
In the far future, Princess Twilight proposes a grand scale project to resolve Equestria's looming energy crisis once and for all. Two retired princesses have some personal issues with this.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 3.2k words · 143 3 · 1.3k views
TFuture Twilight Is a Bully
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Drama
Sci-Fi
Future Twilight returns with more than just a warning.
Twilight
Bad Dragon · 1.5k words · 19 17 · 589 views
EMy Little Pony Friendship is Magic The Movie: What If?
MLP: FiM
MLP: Movie
Adventure
Drama
Thriller
(Takes place within my "What If?" rewrite series, familiarity with its volumes is recommended.) An alternate take on the 2017 movie exploring if scenes had played out differently, and some characters were written differently.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Spike
Other
Main 6
Tempest Shadow
SuperPinkBrony12 · 49k words · 27 2 · 658 views
TA Student Turned Princess
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Drama
A young student opens his eyes on his first day of college... in the body of Princess Celestia herself.
Violence
Profanity
Human
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
FlightfulPone · 13k words · 285 9 · 3.6k views
EPassing The Badge
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Rainbow Dash is uncertain how she'll balance her life as Captain of the Wonderbolts. The former captain has a few words to say.
Rainbow Dash
Spitfire
6-D Pegasus · 2.5k words · 62 3 · 541 views
EShow Me The Stars
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
A young boy in the city dreams of seeing the stars through the smog. Far away, a certain Princess hears his dreams.
Human
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 4.3k words · 75 0 · 657 views
EHer Majesty's Special Helpers
MLP Gen 5
Comedy
Drama
Slice of Life
Follow Thunder Flap and Zoom Zephyrwing on a typical day in the service of Queen Haven: Overseeing security prep, smuggling Alphabittle in for a not so secret rendezvous, waiting for Zipp and Pipp to show up. All in a day's work.
Other
Queen Haven
Thunder
Zoom
SuperPinkBrony12 · 4.8k words · 19 0 · 344 views
EEclipse Awareness (Or Lack Thereof)
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Following Twilight's coronation, Celestia and Luna organize a mutual solar eclipse to celebrate the end of their rule. Unfortunately, they forgot to let anypony know of this.
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 4.3k words · 194 6 · 1.8k views
EDiamond at a Crossroads
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
(Takes place within the universe of "The Sitter with the Diamond Tiara" and its semi-sequel "A Dazzling School Daze".) Plagued by uncertainty about her future, Diamond Tiara visits Cheerilee in hopes the teacher can guide her one last time.
Diamond Tiara
Cheerilee
SuperPinkBrony12 · 2.9k words · 16 0 · 188 views
EThe Tale of Spike's Egg
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Tragedy
(Collab with yodajax10. Takes place immediately after "Father Knows Beast".) Spike flies to Canterlot to ask Princess Celestia for answers about his past. Princess Celestia opts to tell Spike about how his egg ended up in her care.
Spike
Celestia
OC
Other
Main 6
SuperPinkBrony12 · 9.4k words · 26 0 · 872 views
EDON'T WRITE TO PRINCESS CELESTIA AT 3 AM (GONE WRONG!)
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
The Cutie Mark Crusaders test the urban legend of writing to Princess Celestia at 3am. Nothing goes wrong.
Spike
Celestia
CMCs
6-D Pegasus · 2.7k words · 241 2 · 2.9k views
TThe Malevolent Multiversal Misadventures of Mare (April Fools 2024 Special)
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Comedy
Random
Once upon a time, there was a random pony in Ponyville. When a villain shows up, this overpowered Mary Sue of a character must venture bëÿönd Extria im order to find thr Generic MacGuffin. Only then will she have a chef of defeating this boring villa
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Bat Pony
Misty
Admiral Producer · 32k words · 19 2 · 187 views
EThe Long Wait
MLP: FiM
Sad
Celestia counts down the centuries until her sister's return.
Celestia
6-D Pegasus · 1.7k words · 110 1 · 1.1k views
TBatmare and Super Dragon: Worlds Collide
MLP: FiM
Drama
Thriller
(A crossover sequel to both "Batmare Triumphant" and "Dragon of Steel II".) The worlds of two costumed superheros: Batmare and Super Dragon, become intertwined. And the two heroes must adjust to their shared universe quickly.
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Applejack
Spike
Other
SuperPinkBrony12 · 17k words · 10 0 · 156 views
EBlues Clues: Happy Easter Blue!
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Slice of Life
Spike, Inferno, Rarity and Sunset all need to play Blues Clues to figure what Blue's favorite thing to do for Easter!
Crossover
Human
Other
Sunset Shimmer
Rarity (EqG)
Spike (EqG)
Big Imagination E · 5k words · 6 9 · 183 views
ERarity's Magical Boutique
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
(Based on "Rarity Catches a Cold" on YouTube by Magpiepony.) Rarity becomes sick while trying to finish up an order, and is forced to stop working. However, her illness causes parts of her workshop to magically come to life and work on the dress.
Rarity
SuperPinkBrony12 · 1.6k words · 16 0 · 174 views
TA Talk With A Bully
MLP: FiM
Mystery
Sad
Slice of Life
After the CMC come home with black eyes, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity take it upon themselves to find out what happened.
Narcotics
Violence
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
Applejack
Rarity
Diamond Tiara
CMCs
Artist · 3.5k words · 29 23 · 672 views
EThe Sad Story of Spike
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Sad
Slice of Life
Tragedy
After the defeat of Opaline, Sunny pays another visit to the dragon lands. She has a few questions for Spike about how he became dragon lord and left Twilight all those years ago. Spike reluctantly agrees to explain everything he can.
Twilight
Spike
Sunny Starscout
Opaline
SuperPinkBrony12 · 4.9k words · 45 1 · 1.6k views
ETwilight Learns How to Ice-Skate
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Twilight wants to learn how to ice-skate to impress Flash.
Twilight
Pinkie
Other
Main 6
Flash Sentry
Heroic412227 · 4.3k words · 16 2 · 512 views

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