New ending · 8:38pm Sep 18th, 2015
Hey I just wanted to let everypony know I redid the ending on My story Discord's party. Instead of a silly changeling battle there is more Discord Magic to help make sure that a Pinkie Promise kept.
its here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/289218/discords-party
Thanks for the watch.... Why are you watching me?
Thank you for the watch.
You needed help?
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You write your stories too much like a play. Read some stories to get an example of how to format your story. If there's anything I can help with, I'll be here!
There are other problems, such as a contrived plot that makes little sense. I can explain if you'd like.
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