When Twilight is looking through some old books she finds a dimension viewing spell. When she shows her friends however they get sucked in. Now they have to blend into there new surroundings while Twilight figures out how to get them back. But this isn't the Ponyville, or Equestria, they know and love, and blending in will be harder and more dangerous then they ever imagined.
Authors Note: The alternate universe they go in is still all ponies, the rules are just different. So they aren't going to meet anything that isn't found in the regular pony world. Also if you find errors please tell me so I can make the story better.
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If what we know about wingboners is true, then Rainbow Dash is doing the equivalent of flashing her breasts.
Nothing to do with the story, just thought I'd mess with some people.
The concept is interesting, but the writing itself is making this incredibly difficult for me to read.
Just skimmed through the story, seems like an interesting setup though. I'll read it thoroughly once there's more of it
This has poitential I'll fav it
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Makokam, what do you mean? Please tell me so I can make this story better!
A HUNDRED VIEWS IN TWO DAYS?!?!
This took a little longer then I hoped, but it's done now. This one isn't too exiting but by the next one we'll get a little more drama, and hopefully more comedy. Any way just hold on and tell me how I can improve, cause this is my first fic and I don't think I'm doing to good at writing it. I really wanted to do this concept though, because I noticed that there was no diversity in the three types of ponies at all. So I made a place were there is super diversity. Anyway, I hope you like it, post a comment! OH, if you can think of a better name for this title I would love to hear some suggestions.
You need to proofread more carefully. There's a lot of basic errors. More than I feel like pointing out, but one comes up several times, so here's a little bit of help.
Scenes is the plural of a scene, as in a movie scene. The word you're looking when something is confusing to a character is sense. "This doesn't make any sense", not "this doesn't make any scenes." You could use scene to say "Let's not make a scene" as in, "let's not draw attention to ourselves", but most of the time when you use the word scenes, its being misused.
That should be since, not scenes.
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OHHH! OK. thank you so much. I'll try to reread them and try to correct errors like that.
I le LOVE THIS
Onward, onto teh next chapter!
This is getting real good. I admire your creativity.
Nyeh, MUST... READ... MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twilight couldn't help but giggle when she say her
Saw, I think.
Otherwise, great story so far, I'll give it a read
You may have 5 moustaches:
You REALLY need to update this story, since it hasn't for a year!............ithink
This is starting out well I rate you 5 out of 5 sad Appleblooms
I award you 3 out of 3 dispair Raritys
I award you 10 pinkie happys
MOAR!
Wow, really good. Would you mind updating in the not-so-distant future, please?