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McPoodle


A cartoon dog in a cartoon world

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In the forty-third year of her reign, Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship and of Equestria, and her friends faced off against a rogue draconequus who had stumbled upon Equestria and who threatened the life and sanity of every creature on the planet. After a titanic battle, she succeeded in defeating the creature…at the cost of her own life.

This is the story of what happened to her after that.

Featured on April 22, 2024.


Crossover with Dot and the Kangaroo (1977), causing 90% of readers to respond “Who and the What?” and 10% of readers to respond with “MacPherson?” To the former: The character I originally created ended up so similar to this obscure character that I decided to merge them; you don’t need to have seen the source material. And to the latter: The rhythm of the title required a last name, and you can’t say for sure that Dot’s last name isn’t MacPherson.

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Comments ( 5 )

This lost me because it was basically a huge rambling narrative. Need to tighten up the prose here; I essentially got tired of reading this.

Which sucks because I grew up with Dot and the Kangaroo. The Bunyip song gave me nightmares.

I'm intrigued. I have a lot in my read later already though, so it may be a while before I get here.
But I will be here.

Fascinating stuff. I have zero familiarity with the other side of the crossover, but this was still an endearing tale of Twilight doing what she does best. Thank you for a delightful read, with some potent emotional hits that never crossed the line into melodrama.

This was a very enjoyable story, it hit certain beats not oft traveled as well as a few common ones. Thank you for writing it.

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