Minty, a pink kirin from a valley oustide of Equestria enjoys a night near the lake of Ponyville. An uncivilised batpony, also decides he wants to be in the same place. Two unlikely friends meeting up in the night
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This needs some work. There are several spelling errors and it’s inconsistent when the Mare in the Moon is mentioned.
This was cute. I quite enjoy the irony of a kirin being the one teaching another about speech and language. Guess she would know better than anyone, right?
Only thing I'd say is maybe give it another editing once-over. But still, cute fic!
Aww cute
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